Steam Sequence

"Steam Sequence"-T3 level. 460,000 Words, no updates. Tags of the work: Steam Age, Mystery, Extraordinary Disease, Teamwork. Rating: A. It has successfully created a unique aesthetic that is both mechanical and mysterious, and the protagonist team can also be said to be distinctive and diverse; B. The overall nature remains to be seen. At present, it seems that the author should belong to the planned category; C. Extra highlights... Does drinking kerosene count as a cure? A brief review in one sentence: "The Age of Steam: A Battle of Extraordinary Patients" 1. Introduction In the fifth year after time travel, Jiang Qin, who suffered from lung disease, went bankrupt. He had to wander among the factories and new routes in Delran City, trying to find a way to solve the life-threatening debt as soon as possible, but he happened to witness the mysterious thing that the world tried hard to hide-- He witnessed with his own eyes his old friend being dissolved and corrupted into an indescribable mass of flesh and blood. The scarlet blade engraved with seven snake scale blood grooves in his hand whispered to him softly: "Hate whispers in the mist, serpents haunt the soot, and the gift of consumption has come in grand glory." "Forty mythological sequences are about to return." "Jiang Qin, do you choose steam and soot, or myth and sequence?" "Or, do you choose humans or me?" 2. Plot, characters and writing level The opening plot is not a good one, and overall it is closer to the traditional classic mode. The author has put some thought into the characters. The protagonist team covers three religions and nine streams. The characters are highly differentiated and somewhat like a group portrait. The author's writing skills are relatively good, and you can feel the imagination and picture from the words. 3. Highlights In the age of steam, extraordinary sequences are no longer rare things in today's online literature field, but whether they can bring out the effect of putting new wine in old bottles depends on how the author uses them. Generally speaking, the steam element mainly plays a decorative role in online articles, but the steam element in this book plays an important role in the plot. The giant steam engine, which can support an industrial city as the source of power, has both extraordinary mystery and mechanical beauty. The steam age has become a wrestling field between old and new forces; in the book The supernatural power system is still in the initial stage of exploration. Rather than power, it is more like the side effects of creatures suffering from supernatural pollution. The author uses images such as snakes/soot, rats/miasma, etc. As the external embodiment of extraordinary power, giving it a mysterious color with a more contemporary background. 4. Questions ①The author rushes out the emotional line before the story gets on track, and the content is relatively unfocused; ② The key clues are not laid out well enough, such as the mysterious and supernatural powers used by each of the accomplices are somewhat abrupt; ③The plot style is becoming less and less serious.