Mix in the Escort Agency and Add Some Immortality

The author's character creation is quite good. I can regard the protagonist and several main supporting characters as flesh-and-blood, and the plot advancement is also good. But there are also a few issues that are not handled well, which affects the sense of reading! One is the core of the novel, that is, the protagonist's career system is poorly shaped! The improvement after upgrading the main profession is too small, and the expectations are too low! Moreover, the arrangement of professional skills is unreasonable, making this professional system unworthy of its name! The main professional bodyguard actually has no skills. The so-called basic boxing, weapons, internal skills, etc. Are all learned independently by the protagonist, and the source of their functions is the panel. This has very little to do with the professional system. Since we want to take the escort profession as the entry point, we must create the main professional skills with the characteristics of the escort profession. Otherwise, the existence of the escort profession will be too low, and it may even be better to say that the main profession is a martial artist! The sub-professions are somewhat similar to the exclusive skills of the main profession, but their presence is too low and their practicality is low. This is nothing in itself, but the author obviously means that this sub-profession will compete with the main profession for experience later. In other words, when the sub-profession is not very practical, it will also occupy the experience points of the main profession, which becomes a problem! Therefore, the author's writing style is putting the cart before the horse! What the author means is that after upgrading the main profession, the efficiency of practicing various martial arts skills of the protagonist will be improved. This is obviously inconsistent with the escort profession. This should obviously be the effect of the martial arts profession, or the martial arts profession can improve the efficiency of practicing martial arts, so this writing is inappropriate! Logically speaking, after the protagonist's golden finger is activated, he must find a martial arts school to apprentice or join to activate the martial arts profession. The escort profession is of little significance, and there is no delay in continuing to make money as an escort. Therefore, since the escort profession is of little use, the acquisition of professional experience should be accelerated to achieve the effect that professional experience can be used to directly add some martial arts experience bars. In this way, the protagonist can focus on the work of an escort, and then get a large amount of experience points to directly add some martial arts experience bars. This is only appropriate! The author writes about the protagonist practicing martial arts hard on his own, gaining professional experience very slowly, and the professional upgrade effect is extremely low, making it boring to read! The second is that the protagonist's life circle is too harmonious, with family harmony, relatives and friends harmony, and colleagues harmony. The atmosphere is too good, and it doesn't fit in with the development of this weird plot! It's a pity. With the author's writing skills in plot description, if he had put more thought into the setting before writing the book, the results should be far better than now!

Are you still that materialistic person with five people and six people? I feel that those of us who study have no brains.

Are there any book friends who have read more than 40,000 hours or have more than 1,000 followers? Let's have a permanent relationship

After reading 70+ chapters, I feel that the protagonist is still a weakling in the system. He has been helplessly driven and cannot be defeated by anyone. Apart from feeling aggrieved, there is no feeling of pleasure at all!

Not bad, the author is working hard to update! The setting of Goldfinger is not bad, beginner, intermediate and advanced, are there any masters or masters behind it? Hahaｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧Keep going, keep going, keep going!

After all, he is still a eunuch. There has been no update for 20 days.

I have written more than 100 chapters, and I can't even defeat a minion...

After reading Chapter 204, I finally got to the introduction. It's not easy.

The more I read, the more something seems wrong. Why write so many messy branches? Majoring in rubbish, with irrelevant branches thrown in. What are you writing about?