Zhenguan Xinfengwei

I have read a few chapters and am not ready to read it. The writing is not bad, but the way of writing and the progress of chapters are very slow. The story is not full. I have put a lot of thought into the wording, but for readers, it is no good. A time-travel novel in the fast food economy. The type you write requires a compact and logical story to attract people.

The gestures of saluting should also be stated clearly. .

It's too obscene, too rubbish, worse than bullshit

When writing ancient Chinese, don't use modern words from time to time, which can be very offensive. After reading the comments, I finally understand why the exemption is limited. It's a popular science article.

After reading a few chapters, 70% of the knowledge about the Tang Dynasty is in science. This is a novel, not a history book.

It is reasonable and does not mean that one is omnipotent just because one is a time traveler. It is in line with historical logic and does not force people to be in the former dynasty with the so-called future generations.