My Time is Running Backwards

In the Lingxiao Palace, the Jade Emperor stared deeply at me: "Amazing! Amazing! You can actually practice the ninth level of Xuanyuan Sword's power!? There has not been such a genius in the world for three thousand years!" "But..." The Jade Emperor changed his subject: "It is difficult, too difficult to break through this last line! Unless you can get the three divine flames: Feng Luo Yan, Tian Xing Yan, and Crystal Flame." I looked at the Jade Emperor coldly and said, "I have the first two, only the last one is missing!" The Jade Emperor was stunned for a moment: "You came to me just for the Crystal Flame?" I nodded and said: "Yes! I came here just for the water experience [Funny][Funny]

In the early stages of the novel, if you have any opinions, dissatisfaction, or your own ideas, you can tell me, and I will consider them all carefully and make corrections as appropriate. By the way, if you feel that this novel is too bad and makes you unhappy, feel free to scold me, but don't scold your family, please 😊

I feel like one heroine is good, but not too much. If you watch too much of the harem, it becomes boring (personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it), so I feel that one heroine is fine, or two, but not too much...

Now that I have read the chapters, I don't know if others can understand it. At least in my personal opinion, I can understand it, and I think it's pretty good. I personally liked the first part of the story very much; but I don't know what happened after that. Probably after the person with a heart transplant and others who could turn back time came on the scene, I felt that it wasn't very to my liking. I won't follow the following chapters. I hope to read other good books by the author in the future. If you have the chance, I will meet you.

Your story line is so messy, I feel like what you are writing now is beyond your control.

Three chapters, too confusing, the plot is too abrupt, and there is no sense of involvement at all.

Very pretty ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

Overall, the most important thing is that there are no details, and there is not much main line. Also, the first few chapters are too complicated. It feels like a slightly detailed outline of the plot

The basic timeline was too much, everything changed at once, and people would probably collapse in a few moments. What's the point of changing a world every Saturday?

Come on, write well and have more words