Mars Survival Live Room

The subject matter of this book is good, but the details need to be improved. The theme of the book is Mars survival live broadcast, so the key point is already obvious. Moreover, from the text, the protagonist has only one life. If he dies, he will really die. So even if there is a base on Mars, intelligence should act with caution. However, the protagonist commits suicide in various ways for the so-called live broadcast effect, and casually listens to the instigation of netizens. After messing around, the spaceship exploded, and he almost died in the mine once. Later, when he dug up suspected alien technology products, he opened it directly without taking protective measures and listened to the opinions of netizens. Overall, the protagonist is just a tool man. He does whatever the netizens say. He has been cheated by netizens so much, but he has no memory. I hope the author can make some improvements. After all, it is a live broadcast with the theme of alien survival. The protagonist is not said to be extremely smart, but he must also have an IQ that is online and can clearly distinguish what can be done and what cannot be done. The brain circuits in this article are so strange...

First of all, let's talk about the character of the protagonist. I feel like he is just a pure *slut and then he is seeking death... It's nothing. It's normal to have all kinds of personalities. Then there is the issue of dividing the live broadcast room. The first is that the barrage can take any ID, which makes it more immersive. The second is that even though Martian creatures have been discovered, people on Earth are still so calm and don't take action? The third is that the discovery of energy crystals is entirely possible to promote the rapid development of aerospace technology for mankind. If nothing else, at least the technology to land on Mars may appear within a few years. Don't think it's too early to know that every country will definitely hide its own strength. Some people say that the national military is twenty years more advanced than civilian use, laboratory-level equipment that has not been popularized is ten years more advanced, reserve technology is ten years more advanced, and coupled with the temptation of energy crystal powder, the possibility of cooperation between major powers is very high. In addition to the problems in the live broadcast room, there is also the author's lack of rigorous data processing. I said earlier that an energy crystal the size of a fingernail is equal to how many tons of nuclear bombs, because I don't know the exact asterisk. But a cockroach's nest is as big as a building. Think about how many nails can fill a building. Such a large energy crystal could probably run a large city for a year. There is such natural energy on Mars. Their technological development is unimaginable. The biggest problem in current technology is the lack of suitable energy. Otherwise, exoskeletons, laser cannons, or rudimentary spacecrafts would not be a problem. And you can feel from the text that the author is basically the same as me about science, that is, he doesn't understand this or that. Forget it, there are too many questions, I will just mention a few. Anyway, in summary, this book is generally deducted by one star for its writing style, one star for unreasonable data processing and settings, and two stars for the science fiction theme that should be more rigorous. Final score: 2 stars. Actually, I wanted to give it one star, but it was too ugly so I decided to give it 2 stars. Finally, here are some townhouse plans.

Give up, you can't stand it anymore, a senior critic speaks

Why are powerful creatures found on Mars, but the Earth has no sense of crisis at all, so it can only shout 6666, and it has always been in the live broadcast room

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I will say something when I see something like this, because there should be no precedent for this, and it may be a bit unreasonable, but the author alone cannot cover everything. If you have any questions, you can directly tell me, don't give malicious ratings, and support the new author.

I read Chapter 10 and there are a few issues that really affect the reading experience! The first spaceship hit a mountain and exploded. Is your spaceship made of paper? Also, my protagonist was in the cab, and the spaceship was blown up, but he was fine. The protagonist was just wearing a space suit. You said it would be fine if there was a system to force an explanation, but it would affect the reading experience! The second time was not clear enough. It said that one month of training and three days of live broadcasting were required to complete the first task. I only saw three days of the live broadcast. Where did I go during the one month of training? How did the protagonist train? It just passed by without telling the details. The details were not handled well, which affected the reading experience! There is also a requirement for the protagonist to live broadcast on Mars for half a year, but later it is said that the supplies can only allow the protagonist to live a planned life for one year, and the protagonist has to grow potatoes to maintain his life. This is because the protagonist can bring items from the earth to Mars to grow potatoes! The food in the base can be made by the protagonist at will, and it can sustain the protagonist's life for half a year. After half a year, the protagonist can purchase materials from the earth, but he still has to plant potatoes. Forcibly added to the plot, it affects the reading experience! Last but not least, now that it has been confirmed that the protagonist is live broadcasting on Mars, the country has no reaction? How is the income from the protagonist's live broadcast calculated? The author's handling of these details is a bit clumsy, which affects the reading experience! The above is my feeling after reading Chapter 10. If anything is wrong, please point it out! Also, I would like to emphasize that this is not to criticize the author, but to hope that the author can take care of the details!

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Wouldn't it be better to get some IDs? This way the sense of immersion is better.

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