Versatile Mage: Rebirth of Mo Fan, Heavenly Spirit Atlas
by The Seven Taixings Of Pen And Ink
About This Novel
[Mo Fan's Rebirth] [Demon Ability] [Rescue Regret] The Great Demon King Mo Fan, after committing suicide again and again, was finally ready to ascend to the Dark World. However, as he cut off his mortal body, he did not appear in Baijie Mountain, but in Bo City many years ago. After resurrecting his life, he brought back not only decades of memories of the Dharma God, but also a treasure called the [Heavenly Spirit Atlas]. Ignite the divine fire in the map to gain the power of the creatures in the map! Golden Yao Titan's Fierce Sun Ring! The Kyushu Wind and Thunder of Ten Thousand Miles Green Dragon! Shadow True Ancestor Beast's Demonic Shadow Mountain! The Sun and Moon Holy Eyes of Creation Yinglong! The Eighteen-Winged Divine Tree of the Descendants of Blazing Sky! ... A few years later, whether it was the Forbidden Magic Mage among humans or the Emperor King in the Demon Realm, when they raised their heads, all they saw was a majestic figure! ! !
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Official(295)Scraped 23d ago
The author of this book is defeated by using Mo Fan's image to drive a car, open a harem, etc., And it's Mo Fan after rebirth! Please don't insult Uncle Luan's image of Mo Fan like this!
After reading other full-time fanfics, I realized that the value of this book continues to increase.
There are a lot of French fan fictions written, but very few are good ones. This book is pretty good. Mo Fan's image is very three-dimensional, which is quite in line with the feeling of the original work Li. Moreover, the original work Mo Fan died shortly after his death. It's good to not have a 100% prophet for so many years. It's good to just remember the key context of major events. Personally I think it looks good, it would be better if there were more.
The character design is broken. He is wearing the leather jacket of Mo Fan's rebirth and doing some speechless things. Mo Fan can only talk a lot, and Asharuya has not seen him. At most, there is physical contact. And this novel has eaten Tang Yue. Since you are reborn, don't change it randomly. If you have time, you might as well create your own protagonist as a time traveler, and use the theme of rebirth to make a big sale.
It's considered good in the whole law, but it's too short.
Very moist
This is not a rebirth. Why don't you write about time travel, or about 18-year-old Mo Fan getting the first round of memories? You have to write about rebirth. After rebirth, you are still so naive, and the later period is basically a plot. It is incredible that this book has a rating of 9.1. When I read the book review section, they all said "I read it" "Other Quanfa fanfics, this one is already very good." "I have read Quanfa fanfics much better, but these are the only ones I can read." To put it bluntly, this book relies entirely on the support of peers. It is short and tall, and it is very watery. If you ask me to say that the writing is bad, I will give it a low score. Why give such a high score?
Well, very good. Why do we read fanfiction? The reason is to see some regrets and characters of Mo Fan late, instead of writing a new protagonist to save it, you can write it, the main thing is to steal Mo Fan's opportunity or woman, at least save one, you are not writing the destiny villain, I am talking about other fan fiction
More like the time travel of Mo Fanpi
1. It is about rebirth of Mo Fan, not time travel Mo Fan. The Mo Fan under Chaoshou is Mo Fan with a bottom line and a bit of a ruffian. It is not the Mo Fan written by the author who is like a local ruffian. The character design is completely destroyed. Originally, Mo Fan would only accept two, and they should not change after being reborn. Tang Yue accepted them with this kind of plot, which really ruined Mo Fan's image. 2. Now that Mo Fan is reborn and has experienced so much in his previous life, Mo Fan in this life should be more prudent and resourceful. What kind of image is he writing? 3. I was immediately persuaded to give up on the plot. I really can't stand it when Mo Fan's character is ruined like this. 4. You can have feelings, but don't write randomly because of feelings
Leave one star as your room for improvement. The logic is pretty good, and the combat power hasn't dropped too much. Although it's a bit over the standard, it's still reasonable since the Dharma God is reborn and has a plug-in. As for the harem, it doesn't matter. No matter how much you accept, as long as it is reasonable and not the kind of stallion you fall in love with at first sight. This is a common problem among many harem fans. It's disgusting. It seems like all the women revolve around the protagonist. Just like Jiang Zhi, they have no personality charm or ideological pursuits of their own. It seems that it can't survive without the protagonist. This is a pretty reasonable harem. It makes up for the regret that Mo Fan confiscated those few in the original work. What is more worth looking forward to is the plot after the curse was banned. The story ended just a few days after Uncle Luan was banned from the curse. It was a bit unfinished. I wanted to beat him up at the time. I hope the author can add the story after the curse was banned.
Can I write more chapters? One chapter a day is so short, who can read it?
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Official(295)Scraped 23d ago
The author of this book is defeated by using Mo Fan's image to drive a car, open a harem, etc., And it's Mo Fan after rebirth! Please don't insult Uncle Luan's image of Mo Fan like this!
After reading other full-time fanfics, I realized that the value of this book continues to increase.
There are a lot of French fan fictions written, but very few are good ones. This book is pretty good. Mo Fan's image is very three-dimensional, which is quite in line with the feeling of the original work Li. Moreover, the original work Mo Fan died shortly after his death. It's good to not have a 100% prophet for so many years. It's good to just remember the key context of major events. Personally I think it looks good, it would be better if there were more.
The character design is broken. He is wearing the leather jacket of Mo Fan's rebirth and doing some speechless things. Mo Fan can only talk a lot, and Asharuya has not seen him. At most, there is physical contact. And this novel has eaten Tang Yue. Since you are reborn, don't change it randomly. If you have time, you might as well create your own protagonist as a time traveler, and use the theme of rebirth to make a big sale.
It's considered good in the whole law, but it's too short.
Very moist
This is not a rebirth. Why don't you write about time travel, or about 18-year-old Mo Fan getting the first round of memories? You have to write about rebirth. After rebirth, you are still so naive, and the later period is basically a plot. It is incredible that this book has a rating of 9.1. When I read the book review section, they all said "I read it" "Other Quanfa fanfics, this one is already very good." "I have read Quanfa fanfics much better, but these are the only ones I can read." To put it bluntly, this book relies entirely on the support of peers. It is short and tall, and it is very watery. If you ask me to say that the writing is bad, I will give it a low score. Why give such a high score?
Well, very good. Why do we read fanfiction? The reason is to see some regrets and characters of Mo Fan late, instead of writing a new protagonist to save it, you can write it, the main thing is to steal Mo Fan's opportunity or woman, at least save one, you are not writing the destiny villain, I am talking about other fan fiction
More like the time travel of Mo Fanpi
1. It is about rebirth of Mo Fan, not time travel Mo Fan. The Mo Fan under Chaoshou is Mo Fan with a bottom line and a bit of a ruffian. It is not the Mo Fan written by the author who is like a local ruffian. The character design is completely destroyed. Originally, Mo Fan would only accept two, and they should not change after being reborn. Tang Yue accepted them with this kind of plot, which really ruined Mo Fan's image. 2. Now that Mo Fan is reborn and has experienced so much in his previous life, Mo Fan in this life should be more prudent and resourceful. What kind of image is he writing? 3. I was immediately persuaded to give up on the plot. I really can't stand it when Mo Fan's character is ruined like this. 4. You can have feelings, but don't write randomly because of feelings
Leave one star as your room for improvement. The logic is pretty good, and the combat power hasn't dropped too much. Although it's a bit over the standard, it's still reasonable since the Dharma God is reborn and has a plug-in. As for the harem, it doesn't matter. No matter how much you accept, as long as it is reasonable and not the kind of stallion you fall in love with at first sight. This is a common problem among many harem fans. It's disgusting. It seems like all the women revolve around the protagonist. Just like Jiang Zhi, they have no personality charm or ideological pursuits of their own. It seems that it can't survive without the protagonist. This is a pretty reasonable harem. It makes up for the regret that Mo Fan confiscated those few in the original work. What is more worth looking forward to is the plot after the curse was banned. The story ended just a few days after Uncle Luan was banned from the curse. It was a bit unfinished. I wanted to beat him up at the time. I hope the author can add the story after the curse was banned.
Can I write more chapters? One chapter a day is so short, who can read it?
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