Versatile Mage: I Can Control You Until You Die

A letter to all French fans: Uncle Luan's "All Mage" can be said to be a masterpiece. The novel realistic world of magicians, the grand magical worldview, and the many flesh-and-blood characters all make people linger. Even though Quan Fa's world has come to an end, there are still many readers who want to continue to roam in Quan Fa's world, and Quan Fa's fans have emerged. To be honest, it is really difficult to write fanfics in Quanfa. Although Uncle Luan laid the foundation for future generations, the framework of Quanfa also brought constraints to later writers. Most of the fans come from the original work, so you need to be more proficient in interpreting the original work than Uncle Luan. If you want to attract readers of the original work, you must make up for the regrets left by the original work and develop new plots. Versatile Mage: I'll Hold You to Death (I don't know the current book, the title is so weird), Xu Fang, as the protagonist, has three views, upright emotional intelligence online (the protagonist mirrors the author himself), humor, and a kind heart, which makes this book stand out among all the pretentious and slap-in-the-face articles, and the protagonist is in love Although the story is pretty good, there is only one heroine, Jiang Fox, and she can be regarded as clean and tidy, which makes this book stand out from the crowd of harem fans (some fan fiction is too much, the protagonist is a humanoid pile driver, whether it is a beast or a ghost , it is too much) Although this book is very good, it also has shortcomings. On the basis of following the main plot, it lacks the supplement of hidden pits and the foreshadowing of the new main plot. The improvement of combat power is not obtained point by point based on hard work. It has a feeling of a light transmission of skills. As the plot progresses, it is coming to the end (Uncle Luan's ending is also slightly sloppy). The collapse of combat power is imminent. I think the author is also under a lot of pressure! In my mind, there are two ways to solve the problem of fan difficulty. One is to write group portraits. By shaping new side stories, connecting each main supporting character, and perfectly cooperating with the main plot advancement, enriching the background stories of supporting characters, and giving important supporting characters a gorgeous appearance and a perfect curtain call (our cute and cute little loli has never been able to participate in the hunter competition, and the upright chief judge always gives people the feeling of fighting against the five scum. Handsome What happened to the decadent uncle and his disaster-stricken girlfriend during their trip to the capital? The scene where Mo Fan's beloved sister Xinxia soared in the sky wearing an angel-wing magic weapon never appeared). The missing background story of the original work is also a big pitfall. The lack of the throne of the Dark King, the seven archangels, Athena and the twelve Knights of the Round Table, the mysterious Kunlun Demon Kingdom, the mysterious leader of the Ocean Empire, and the origin of the terror of the Black Vatican are all worthy of improvement by fans. Finally, I hope that the author of this book will continue to work hard, have more blessings, and write a perfect and thoughtful ending as much as possible. ------Sincerely, Zhujiu, all fans in France

The full-time circle is really too chaotic. I feel that I am Mo Fan's sister's comments are more normal (I feel that this is the first full-time fandom that got me into the trap). There are also those who say they come to see the harem and to collect women. Otherwise, they come to see what the fandom is doing. I don't know why. I can't control it. I don't know. I have never argued with them or said they were wrong. I just want to say that I read fanfics because the original works have many difficult to reconcile, or I want to watch the same world with different protagonists, such as Perfect, Zhetian, Dou Po, Wudong, Fox Demon, and Full-time (Master) Douluo (1, 2, 3) fanfics. I've watched them all, and they're not as chaotic as the full-time world, where there are scoldings and wars everywhere. (I know that many people in Douluo criticize Tang San for his double standards. I have also received some influence from the Internet literary circle, but I have restrained myself from commenting and arguing with others. That is, many novel authors write novels against Tang San, so I don't read too many fans of Douluo 1, but Douluo 1 is after all, I entered the animation circle and then entered the Internet article. The first book in the Douluo circle, although it does not have such a huge world view and exaggerated combat power now, there were still many people waiting for his update at the time.) Although everyone in Douluo laughed at him as a fantasy floor tile, and I also joked about it, his plot was still very good at the time. Otherwise, how could San Shao write a novel and become an author worth over 100 million?

Does this novel by the author have multiple heroines or... Does the heroine include Heidi Blanche, Concubine Irene Qin Yuer, Mu Nu, Jiao Mu Nu, Xin Muning, Snow, Ding Yumian, Leng Qing, Tang Yue...

When reading novels, especially fan novels, most of them are about the main character traveling through time to seek benefits through wisdom and reason. He is someone who has a clearly careerist personality and wants to be a master, which is very satisfying. Personally, I feel that fan novels, especially the type where the protagonist travels through time, most hope that the protagonist can be smart, or rational, and do not require the time-traveling protagonist to be extremely intelligent. As long as the author writes fan fiction and depicts the time-traveling protagonist as relying on foresight to gain benefits and relying on poor information to reap benefits, at least the protagonist has a witty and smart character, for example, a gentleman will not stand behind a dangerous wall. However, I have read a lot of full-time fans, including this book, and most of the time-travel protagonists in full-time fans are "Wei Guangzheng", "Savior" and "Hot-blooded Man Hero Setting" (The original male protagonist of "Full-time Mage" is the male protagonist of the hot-blooded comic, and the savior Wei Guangzheng is set.) You write a fan novel and set the male protagonist to be the same type as the original male protagonist. So what's the difference between what you wrote and the original work? The setting of the male protagonist is the same, and the plot is roughly the same (for example, the crisis in Bo City, the crisis in the ancient capital. Most full-time fans will write about the protagonist participating in the battle in Bo City.) The setting of the male protagonist is the same, and the plot is roughly going the same way, so it is better to just read the original work.

... The poisonous point is obvious. You dare to come here and write a fanfic without even knowing the basic settings of the original work... The light system is not the only one that restrains the undead system, the ice plant system is also restrained; the light system can only make the shadows exist, not directly destroy them; Pearl Academy Qing There are a lot of intermediate students on campus, but it turns out that only intermediate students can go to the main campus. When promoting science, can you read the original work? People just read science as online novels. You can make bombs and helicopters, but you don't even have machine tools. What a waste? It's also specifically a propeller type one. I'm really not afraid of falling to death. Is it difficult to use Baidu without common sense? ... The players in the World Palace Competition are at the same level as Mo Fan, but here you are, they just jumped one level without even a few explanations. It's crazy. In the original book, the magic tool is very strong, but it turns out that it is like being made of mud, and it breaks after two or three times. How funny is it? Humorous, right? People rely on Pi Yan to take up so much space; the demon is very strong, but in the hands of the protagonist, it is like paper. Is it really difficult for you to explain things clearly? Even if it is fusion magic, it is not a monster that can be defeated in seconds that requires five to seven magicians... The protagonist's forging talent is also very ridiculous. It is the first time he comes into contact with magic circles and forging, and he has no foundation at all. However, with just a glance, he will be like, isn't it, is it difficult to make a reasonable arrangement? ? ? Is there some logic? This is just the tip of the poisonous iceberg.

The setting of the bomb is very crude. The military department must have military explosives, but why they are not popularized? It must be due to defects in cost and safety of use. What's more, this is a novel with a magic theme. Readers want to read about mages who play magic, not ordinary people who play with bombs. If you spend time writing this, you are getting the wrong theme. So why not just write a science and technology novel. To put it simply, mages are the mainstream in the world of magic. The high degree of combination of magic and technology requires at least a hundred years after the popularization of magic. Which high-end master will come out to invent such a destructive combination of magic and science. In short, there is no need to write about bombs. No one wants to read this. When the author writes this, he might as well write more about the fusion of magic. Alas, it is really a bit of a cerebral thrombosis. The original work is confusing. Why not write this? He can think of Edison, the originator of the light system, but not Nobel, the father of dynamite? After all, the theme of this novel is magic rather than technology, so based on this, any capitalization of technology is actually a destruction of the original settings. I hope the author can pay attention to the theme!

Comment from the standpoint of the values ​​of a full-time mage. Nothing to do with reality. It's true that you are a descendant of a military mage. But you have done enough for the country. Why did you join the military mage? After giving so much, what do you get? This is the poorest fan fiction, right? You are restricted in every aspect. Just join, they won't give you anything, you have to do everything yourself. In the end, Master Luo will do it. What are you planning! . ? ? ? Too naive! Picture of Jiang Shaoxu? Bought the whole thing for yourself? The strength is not weak anymore! What are you planning? I won't say anything else if the title of the book does not match the content. What is this picture? You are too naive. You dare to let others know about the things that the ancient king got in that period, Shaji! What an idiot. I suggest you read the book written by Chen Shulao Liu. Although the writing is a bit cold-blooded, that is the reality. It's not worth what you pay for as a full-time mage. There are too many borers.

I have also read more than ten full-time fanfics. At least so far, this one is one of the best. I love Huang Mao so much. The author's writing is excellent. Finally, I hope that the heroine will only be Jiang Shaoxu. They are so suitable.

Don't write about technology when writing a fanfic about a full-time mage. If you look at the original text, you won't be able to write about technology. The cities are all run on magic stones. The whole technology is like a meat bun beating a dog. The bombs are tolerated in the front, and a drone is built in the back.

Is there multiple heroines or is there a harem heroine? Is there Mu Ningxue?