Mortal: You Have the Heaven Palm Vase, and I Have the Gaode Map

The first three golden chapters of the opening show the obscene thoughts of a little loser, running around without a plan and blaming others. The first chapter of the opening shows the big poisonous society. The giant baby feels that the world revolves around him, and the world's resources are also his. After Han Li got the original Han Li's things, he felt like he was being killed. He was as jealous as his parents and wanted to kill Han Li's whole family. Much worse than Tang San. [The whole thing is a mad dog giant baby] [The most important thing is that there is no shortage of exercises and resources in the Tiannan region. Can't you just make up a few exercises and treasures yourself? ] Your plug-in is about finding resources, [and then after getting the plug-in, you started to ridicule endlessly, look down on this and look down on that] If you are a real person, I am afraid that as soon as you have money, you will kick out your parents. The original novel was about an inner demon, but the fanfic magnified it infinitely and used it to make excuses. This shows how immature and unsteady the protagonist's mind is. This is the first novel that treats Foundation Building Pills as worthless, as if anyone can get them to build eggs. You can easily grab the Foundation Establishment Pill outside, and by taking the Foundation Establishment Pill to build the foundation, he actually gained a realm of emptiness. . After entering the Foundation Establishment Pill, I poured twenty 4 Foundation Establishment Pills, but I almost couldn't build the foundation. Moreover, the resources found by the system were not refined through seclusion. I read 20 or 30 pieces and couldn't stand it anymore. This is a novel I wrote after reading one and a half chapters of the original novel and then watching the anime to gain popularity. The protagonist's character is mentally immature, and social parenting often jumps around. Randomly changing the settings of the original work, and copying the skills, resources, etc. From Han Li Dear readers, do you know that this protagonist is far worse than Tang San? Personally, I feel that comparing Tang San with him is insulting to Tang San. His first thought after getting the plug-in was "Everyone is a stinking beggar."

If you really have that ability, don't take advantage of the heat. I couldn't stand the first picture. Where could I have such great resentment and resentment? Although he is a character in a novel, I can feel it from your writing. So just like what a netizen said. Change your career and don't starve to death.

Your first picture made me vomit, I can really complain, mortals are in a world of inner demons, you are the only one...

Who rated this book 8.0? It's poisonous at the beginning. Can't the protagonist at least be more three-dimensional and human-like? Just like a small-time street gangster, his heart is as high as the sky and his life is as thin as paper.

Your concentration is so bad. You are a hundred-year-old alchemy monk, and you are jealous of a qi practitioner. You are pretending to be a qi practitioner, because one qi practitioner provoked another qi practitioner girl. I couldn't help it. Why, all the women in the world belong to the protagonist. Just because of this, you feel embarrassed and can't stand it. Then why do you do qi training to keep a low profile? Chapter 143

Even if this is a rare mortal fanfic, I can't stand it. It's so disgusting, full of bad things, and the character of the main character is not good.

It's not that I'm crazy. After reading some of it, why does it get worse and worse? This is the bestseller The first few pictures will blow your mind. I can't bear all the poison anymore, so I say goodbye!

It's so awesome. I have low talent to begin with, but when I learned how to make medicine, I tried to use the thousand-year-old elixir that I had finally obtained. I practiced it before I was ready, and failed a dozen times? ? Don't you know how to cherish this thousand-year-old elixir? What kind of writing is this? ? ?

To be fair, this book is unconventional and worth reading. 1. While other fans are either reproducing or copying the Little Green Bottle, this book is novel and interesting. 2. In other books, the advantage of knowing the plot is often used to seize various opportunities. The effect is to follow Han Li's old path again, which is equivalent to re-reading the original novel. The further it goes, the more boring it becomes. This is indeed a brand new version that has not been seen before. 3. The fun of fan fiction lies in the interaction with the protagonist, or the completion of the plot of the supporting characters. You must know that more than a hundred years after Han Li left Tiannan, many supporting characters in Tiannan also had their own wonderful lives. This is what the fan fiction should complete. 4. Chen Qiaoqian's new image is very well created. Other fans are basically love-brained tools, but people grow, and no one can be a love-brain for more than a hundred years. Chen Qiaoqian's changes in this book are interesting and clever, which is much stronger than the previous thin image. She should also have a different life during the more than a hundred years of building her foundation.

The character of this protagonist is really great, he was born to be a demon cultivator or a robber cultivator.