Douluo: Dharma, Heaven and Earth

If you don't have an innate soul power of level seven or above, don't lick Tang San. First, you are of no value to Tang San. Second, you can't keep up with Tang San and Shrek. You have no background and you have no qualifications. Don't think about fairy grass or the like. Tang San didn't even give Tai Lung. Someone else has a level 89 grandfather, and yes Tang San's loyal dog is not given to you, so why should I give you a half-hearted time traveler, and most of the time travelers are very arrogant. Others Tang San can't see it. You want to get benefits for others, but you feel a little awkward. Tang San is a thirty or forty-year-old man in his previous life, and he was a killer. Can't he see these little thoughts of yours? Don't dazzle in front of others

The big account was reported, so I specially commented on the small account. Sad, I really like the previous writing style I gave it to that woman in Tianmeng and was poisoned. It's totally fine to have a female protagonist, and it's totally fine to create your own But don't you think it's abstract? The writing is really not bad, why does it have to be written like this? There are so many fanfics about Douluo, but when I didn't write it until later, I felt that the author's writing was very insightful. It seems to be Tang San, without any black spots No brainless plot, no subversive plot The writing is not bad, but why didn't Tianmeng give him the protagonist? Give it to that woman Doesn't follow logic, doesn't follow the original timeline If that woman was just a small supporting role, there would be no problem. It could even be said that this plot point is just a small node in ordinary life. There are many novels about this M-type character, and there are quite a lot of them. As a heroine, a reader, and difficult to explain I believe I am not the only one who thinks that this girl is not worthy You have to say that her setting is not to be behind the heroine or to have multiple heroines. But does it make sense that Tianmeng, who is so old, would give it to this girl? I'm just a what if Didn't say anything else Don't report me for deleting my review, it's hard to comment on it, but please also take a look at readers' comments. Thank you author

To be honest, Tang San can take advantage of him, but if you want to change him, it's basically impossible. Don't be a child yourself. Tang San is a child, so just treat him like a little brat that no one cares about! (Xuan Tian Bao Lu, don't keep pretending to be a pig🐷, or you will really turn into a pig) For an adult murderer who lives in killing all year round, his social background is a feudal slave. How can I change my fixed personality just by talking to you? Are there any stories with a female protagonist? One? Many? If it is a single female protagonist who needs to use Tang San in the early stage, she suggests choosing Ning Rongrong. She looks like a green tea bitch and a white lotus scheming man named Oscar. Robbed her. It can be seen from all Tang San's operations in the original work that everything is distributed according to profit. Among the Shrek Seven Monsters, Oscar brings the lowest profit, followed by Ma Hongjun (the dean's apprentice). In the later stage, Ma Hongjun, who came from behind to win the Oscar (Son-in-law of Qibao Liuli), could not keep his wife. The benefits brought by Ning Rongrong were too great. It is also the easiest to conquer. For other heroines who can bring greater benefits, it is unrealistic to tell the truth. Qian Renxue couldn't even think about it. Hu Liena was too old and couldn't catch up with her level. Don't even think about it.

Seeing what was written before was so good, I thought that there was finally a breath of fresh air in the same black three. To be honest, now Douluo is killing three and grabbing three everywhere🌿, it's either Shrek or Wuhun Temple. I'm tired of reading it. I finally got a good book and I have to go crazy and create an original perverted girl with a brain-brained Wuhun. She joins in for no reason, and she keeps losing her mind, watching the scene. Besides, Tianmeng will also give this woman a four-hundred-year-old soul beast later. She should do it after Tang San obtains the spirit ring. Tang San can make some hidden weapons to solve the problem. He insists on introducing this bad heroine like this. The name also has a western flavor. The surnames of people in the Sun and Moon Empire are all Chinese. You are from the whole West. The son of the city lord is surnamed Xiao, and the daughter is a foreigner, right?

To be honest, it could have been 5 stars, but the author added a very SB creative character. If this person is ordinary, it can be watched, but she is also a pervert, which is very S. The plot is quite good at the beginning, and once you get to the first soul ring, you will have a high probability of being thrown into the street. Can't you just keep writing normally? I have to add this one. To be honest, as soon as I saw that this martial soul is a brain, I felt okay. If you put this person at around level 40 of the protagonist, I can accept it. But at the beginning, it is just cool and too awkward.

I really didn't expect that you would give a fool one of the cheats in Douluo World, Tianmeng Bingshu gave it to me, I really don't know what to say. Look, you let a pervert get one of those cheats, and then go to the next step? You just wrote about meeting Zhu Zhuqing, then meeting Ning Rongrong, and then meeting Oscar. If you really can't do it, read the original work. Although the original work is just like that, but you read the anime and you really can't understand it. You gave Dou Er, a plug-in night to a fool, and the soul bone was casually revealed. If you really don't believe it, read some other fantasy books you are writing. Look, what are you writing? One of the plug-ins that a pervert can get. Damn it, a good martial soul was perfected by you just like that. It really doesn't work. You can refer to Wei Na from Douluo II World. The brain belongs to the mental type. The martial soul is treated like this by you. I'm convinced. I suggest you either delete that pervert or create a new one. Anyway, this pervert can't accept it.

The big martial soul is a woman, her body is comparable to that of a great soul master, and her soul power is level 10. Then she comes inexplicably. Just think about the plot with your feet. It will be disgusting anyway. Author, do you think the rating is too high and are you ready to let yourself go?

The first part was very good, but the second part was ruined by that woman who was the deputy city lord, and that woman was just a fucking pervert, and almost ruined the whole book. Even if this book had two male protagonists, I didn't want that woman to be the female protagonist.

In the early stage, I was quite satisfied with it. After all, I wanted to find Douluo fans who would join the group and have logical theory. There were quite few . I am currently following this book and ((Douluo: Leading Tang San to Fight Gangzi)). I am very satisfied with these two books , but now since the woman Romantina appeared, I have been reading this book with a frown The author may want to be abstract, which is what I thought at first, but the more I look at it, the more difficult it is to comment There are too many scenes! Do you know? There are more scenes than Xiao Wu, and the reader is forced to feed (an unknown object) 💩I want to write about colors but I can't, it's stiff and dry. Again, I was quite satisfied at first, but now... Haha, you understand everything, right Bye👋. Oh, by the way, there is also ((Douluo: Twins Douluo)) which is also very good. The protagonist's martial spirit is Qian Jue, and he also follows the group. You can go and read it. It has been completed, and VIP can read the full text for free. The price/performance ratio is higher than this book

There were some minor flaws but overall it was okay until I saw Tianmeng sacrificed to a female pervert.