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It turns out that it is Lao Duan, and the protagonists of Xianxia have friendship. More novels like this can be good guidance for teenagers. The shortcomings are that one person has achieved enlightenment, chickens and dogs ascend to heaven, and the characters are thin, especially the women (without personality) Recommendation index:★★★

[Hay]★★☆ If you want to write a protagonist who kills decisively, don't write a story where the protagonist's blood boils when he sees injustice. A more rational and calm character is more popular.

The transformation work of the old author Broken Bridge Can Snow. Behind the scenes flow, pretending flow, To be honest, in general, the plot is full of all the poisonous points that can be written in online articles. The key is that the characterization is too broad, and the protagonist is not mentioned. No matter who he is, he will call his lord as the boss (including elder relatives). The supporting characters are always shocked, numb, and stunned. No matter how big or small it is, no matter what the character or experience... It is simply poisonous.

Recommendation index:⭐⭐⭐ Cool article, large volume, and a lot of books to read