Martial Arts Supreme Development System
by Huang Yige
About This Novel
In the martial arts world of Daqian, martial arts is respected There is a Taoist priest who rides an ox westward, trampling on three mountains and crossing four seas, thousands of miles of yellow sand and wind slowly There is a monk who leads a horse from the east, and the waves are smooth, and the river is thousands of miles long, and there are no waves. With the spirit of book business, the wind and rain startle the pen as it falls, and the poems become weeping ghosts and gods. There is that fierce general who comes out of the mountain, can carry the cauldron, swallows the mountains and rivers with anger, and the cauldron dominates the country for four hundred years. A young man from outside the territory, who is responsible for the training system of the martial arts supreme, comes to this world, stirs up the wind and rain, and is destined to ascend to the supreme position.
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Official(48)Scraped 11d ago
There is a problem in Chapter 59. Hunyuan Palm and Hunyuan Gong are the same martial arts.
Huashan Hunyuan Palm and Neigong Hunyuan Gong are the same martial arts. . . . The method of practicing Hunyuan Gong is to practice it through Hunyuan Palm, from the outside to the inside.
I haven't watched it, so I won't comment or rate it yet.
Most of those who have a system are in the harem. My fellow Taoists, is this one?
I like the author's style. Set some obstacles for the protagonist appropriately. Don't become a god or immortal at every turn.
I saw two pages with too many typos. I couldn't stand it. It was too watery.
A little suggestion
I think the protagonist can learn Bei Ming Sheng Gong early, because to practice Bei Ming Shen Gong, you must first remove all your internal energy. When the state is high, it will be too troublesome to practice it again. Moreover, the Beiming Magic Technique cannot be used on people whose internal strength exceeds one's own. It is better to learn it as early as possible.
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Strengthen my great heavenly sword. The white jade capital in the sky has five cities on the 12th floor. Immortals caress my head, knotting my hair and receiving immortality.
It's okay, just a little watery
It's okay, but it's a bit dull. There's not a lot of unnecessary content. I just write a lot in places that don't need to be so detailed. For example, I have to describe the Wuji Kung Fu, the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, Tai Chi, the Tianshan Plum Blossom Hand and other martial arts that I haven't learned in a thousand words. To be honest, these are really unnecessary. The same is true for fighting. I need to write in which direction I move a few steps and which foot I lift. Personally, I think it's really unnecessary. It looks tiring. I recommend it.
Learn more martial arts
You should learn more martial arts magic skills, and learn magic skills once you have a good foundation.
Chapter 74 Why buy Hunyuan Gong? Hunyuan Gong and Hunyuan Palm are basically the same martial arts.
Chapter 74 Why buy Hunyuan Gong? Hunyuan Gong and Hunyuan Palm are basically the same martial arts. Isn't this a waste? . . .
? ?
? New book? What time will it be updated????
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Official(48)Scraped 11d ago
There is a problem in Chapter 59. Hunyuan Palm and Hunyuan Gong are the same martial arts.
Huashan Hunyuan Palm and Neigong Hunyuan Gong are the same martial arts. . . . The method of practicing Hunyuan Gong is to practice it through Hunyuan Palm, from the outside to the inside.
I haven't watched it, so I won't comment or rate it yet.
Most of those who have a system are in the harem. My fellow Taoists, is this one?
I like the author's style. Set some obstacles for the protagonist appropriately. Don't become a god or immortal at every turn.
I saw two pages with too many typos. I couldn't stand it. It was too watery.
A little suggestion
I think the protagonist can learn Bei Ming Sheng Gong early, because to practice Bei Ming Shen Gong, you must first remove all your internal energy. When the state is high, it will be too troublesome to practice it again. Moreover, the Beiming Magic Technique cannot be used on people whose internal strength exceeds one's own. It is better to learn it as early as possible.
Cover praise
Strengthen my great heavenly sword. The white jade capital in the sky has five cities on the 12th floor. Immortals caress my head, knotting my hair and receiving immortality.
It's okay, just a little watery
It's okay, but it's a bit dull. There's not a lot of unnecessary content. I just write a lot in places that don't need to be so detailed. For example, I have to describe the Wuji Kung Fu, the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, Tai Chi, the Tianshan Plum Blossom Hand and other martial arts that I haven't learned in a thousand words. To be honest, these are really unnecessary. The same is true for fighting. I need to write in which direction I move a few steps and which foot I lift. Personally, I think it's really unnecessary. It looks tiring. I recommend it.
Learn more martial arts
You should learn more martial arts magic skills, and learn magic skills once you have a good foundation.
Chapter 74 Why buy Hunyuan Gong? Hunyuan Gong and Hunyuan Palm are basically the same martial arts.
Chapter 74 Why buy Hunyuan Gong? Hunyuan Gong and Hunyuan Palm are basically the same martial arts. Isn't this a waste? . . .
? ?
? New book? What time will it be updated????
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