I'm Really Low-key

Although the outline and ending have been preliminarily decided before the book starts, too many people have been asking questions about the heroine recently. I would like to send a questionnaire here to see what the readers' attitudes are. After all, you are the bread and butter. I urge all readers to pass by and leave a message to reply. Thank you! A, I will only accept Guo Xiang as the single female lead and will never give in. B. There is a single female protagonist. If the female supporting role is well described, she can be accepted as the final female protagonist. C. You can be bold and have more female protagonists. As long as the emotions are well portrayed, no good girl should be let down. D, single heroine, one in the real world and one in the game world... Huh? This single female lead is a bit strange. E, just follow the author's idea. It is said that it is an organic unity of a single heroine and a full cast, and everyone is happy? F, what kind of female protagonist do you want? The male protagonist will be single until old age! G, for other ideas, please leave a message.

26 of the 51 comments are visible, not many have been deleted... Tsk. The writing is okay, the wording is a bit boring but no major problems yet. The plot has an unusual routine, which is that the ancient online game luck flow and the current time travel Shen Yong flow are stitched together, and the game settings are nothing new. In addition, everyone Shen Yong usually wears a vest frequently or keeps a low profile and hides his cultivation, but this book... It's hard to describe in one sentence. At the same time, the protagonist does not show his previous experience and magnanimity in the world of martial arts, so in the author's writing he is more like a gangster who knows a little bit about martial arts. If you think of this book as an urban entertainment article about martial arts masters playing online games, you can read it, but the 9.5 Rating would be a downgrade.

At the end of the Qin Dynasty, Yu Ji was very affectionate to the Overlord. Everyone knows this. Because the Overlord was often busy with wars, many documents were marked by Yu Ji imitating Xiang Yu's style. Over time, Yu Ji could imitate the Overlord's style with her eyes closed. Later, a unique writing technique was formed. This character seems to be domineering and majestic, but it also has a vague connotation of woman and euphemism. You can find a bit of Yu Ji's shadow, which is her unique writing style passed down by later generations, called blind Ji Ba writing.

The author said it was a single heroine, but as it turns out, there is more than one heroine. I hope to take them all.

A few small suggestions: 1. It is best to keep the writing style consistent before and after. It is easy to cause drama if a few chapters of Gu Long are suddenly interspersed in the funny flow. If you are not a master of comedy like Stephen Chow, it would be difficult to control this abrupt insertion design. 2. Being relaxed and funny does not mean colloquial writing, but creating a happy atmosphere through gags or ordinary daily life interactions, thereby gradually infecting the protagonist. You can refer to some Japanese light novels. 3. This rating can easily lead to high expectations for later readers, but those who compete in the same grade are geniuses from various genres such as Lord of Best Friends, Swordsman in the Snow, and Super Divine Master. Objectively speaking, there is still a certain gap. 4. The background of the protagonist should be three-dimensional. For example, what magical skills or powerful enemies the protagonist encounters. Based on the character design, it should not be to marvel at the attributes, but to appropriately intersperse whether there are any similar magical skills and masters in the previous life to make the character image and background three-dimensional and vivid. Now the background of the character is more like a brick, which is moved out when needed. The tool attribute is too strong, which leads to the flattening of the character. 5. The protagonist used to be very powerful, but fell into a trough (physical and psychological angles) and needs to grow out of the knot. It is indeed a slightly cliché, but timeless choice of material (but not as popular as before), and the changes in mood before and after test the delicateness of the writing. It is easy to fall into a predicament that is too deliberate or too sudden, so it is better to treat the change of character as a hidden line, and then establish a more important bright line that is the core of the plot. 6. This bright line, in the early stage of the book, is expressed as a short-term apprenticeship to learn a craft, and the long-term goal is to make money, and then live a happy life, but this goal... Is a bit too cramped, as if I, Yoshikage Kira, just want to live an ordinary life, and it is slightly false to say it. I recommend a few small goals: I want to integrate hundreds of schools of thought and create a set of supreme magic skills; I want to travel around the world and indulge in the mountains and rivers; I want to dress up and be angry with my horse. In an online game where I am not afraid of death, I am no longer as cautious as in my previous life, and I can directly enjoy my grudges and grudges. 7. According to the author, this online game may not be a simple online game. Is it a blind guess that it is a projection of the world? But the settings are not much different from traditional monster fighting. If you want the game to appear more realistic, I recommend a book I play as a professional in Warhammer. You can learn from the settings of realistic games. Emmm, it is difficult to grasp such a grand development, but I hope it can be written well. 8. The author's attitude is really nice. I wish him more and more readers, his writing will become better and better, and he will receive more subscription rewards. Come on, Ollie.

Let me go, how can such a good book have no weekly recommendation votes at all? The next recommendation votes are all yours.

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I really like Xuezhong so much. The book lends me great righteousness, and heaven and earth give me back my life. I will eventually fall into the secular world, but my romance will never die. I will dream of becoming the sword god respected by thousands of people with the three-foot green sword, and become the unbeatable swordsman in the world!

There is a flaw in this book, and that is a flaw that all old bookworms cannot tolerate! That means the update is too slow

The writing is very good^ω^ The new book is not poisonous either You can come and take a look😊