The Immortal in Konoha

I think the main character's name is a bit girly

The main character's name looks like a woman's

In fact, the flesh-and-blood reality is enough. Aren't the blows received in reality not enough? Do you have to find sadness in books? When reading a novel, you just want to read a lyrical novel. Otherwise, what kind of novel should you read? If you are looking for pain, you can read history or prose. The writing is too sad and in fact no one wants to read it. Moreover, the protagonist's pain in Genli is actually very blunt.

If I can't continue writing without rewriting

Uh... I suddenly shuddered when I saw the protagonist's manic laughter when he changed his mentality. This sudden change made me embarrassed...

A very good book, keep writing.

It's clearly written well. What kind of roots should I add? It's useless, right?

It looked good before, but then I don't know why it got worse. It was obviously good before! !

I hope the author writes the protagonist's parents to death. Everyone is mortal. If you don't want them to die, why don't you give them your immortality skills?

Author, what magical powers does the protagonist have? Ask for answers.