Infinite Ghost Sword

Your subject matter is very good, but it is best not to make the first world too strong. Unless you want to write an invincible flow, it is impossible to write only 23 worlds in an infinite flow. In this case, a maximum of 5 worlds will be almost the strongest, but this is okay, provided that at least 4 of these 5 worlds are high-energy, very high-energy, otherwise it will be over soon. If you plan for the long term, you can start with many good skills like this. Equipment, but it should be like unblocking layer by layer, slowly getting stronger. If so, you can write more. Infinite flow fighting scenes are almost enough. More should be descriptions of people's psychological level. However, it is absolutely not allowed to mention the fighting in one stroke. These are just my thoughts and suggestions. The key depends on personal preference. If the author wants to describe the story in his mind, then keep writing it. Come on =_=

Wish for Eternal Wishes Belt

I'm in my fifth grade, and you, the author, I'm also a student🤡

Is this the rhythm of writing an invincible novel?

Bad review of the main character's name

I didn't say anything at all,

The author will update soon.

There seems to be no blue in Sword Art Online SAO, only sword skills, and sword skills only have CD.

It started to fall apart in the third chapter, the description was too exaggerated

Good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking