The Arrival of the Sacred Tree of Fire Shadow

Should I accept Tsunade or not?

There are too many loopholes. The one-year-old can talk and the ferret must be at least four years old at the wrong time.

The later stage is basically about fighting and killing. I hope the author can create some special ones, such as interstellar battleships or attack the Otsutsuki clan, use some special conductors that can reduce chakra consumption, or chakra mechas, and be equipped with special blood succession boundaries, restrain ninjas, multi-attribute attacks, and ultra-high computer-assisted combat. Etc.

You became the leader of the clan at the age of three, and everyone accepted it. Why did everyone else think you were possessed by a monster? It's okay if I don't slice you up and study you. Three years old is more powerful than a Konoha high-level executive. I don't know that a big tree attracts the wind.

1. It has the ability to wirelessly control puppets. The controlled puppets have self-awareness, and the number and scale of control are far superior to those of hundreds of machines. You can also control other people's mental will and actions, and obtain information in their brains. 2. Can remotely extract chakra from other people, except those with white eyes. Moreover, once people who are not after Hamura come into contact with the reincarnated eye, chakra will be forcibly extracted. You can also directly swallow other people's ninjutsu and fight back at the enemy. 3. A large stone statue (similar to Hamura in appearance) can be summoned. As long as the holder of the reincarnation eye is undefeated, the stone statue will not disappear. Even if the stone statue is broken, it can still be quickly restored. 4. Has the ability to control space, and can set up illusion traps in different spaces. This ability connects the moon and the earth. He also has the ability to see beyond the white eyes. 5. Ability to control gravity and repulsion, so powerful that it can even control the orbit of the planet. 6. You can enter the reincarnation chakra mode, which is characterized by the green chakra covering the whole body. In this mode, you can use the seeking jade for attack and defense, and you can also use techniques such as the golden wheel reincarnation blast and the silver wheel reincarnation blast.

I like to read fan fiction, and I have read a lot of it, including Naruto, One Piece, and Bleach. But I want to say that you can have imagination, but imagination is not nonsense. Since you are a fan, you should follow the general trend and change the small trend. After reading the book you wrote, I think from the perspective of an old bookworm, your writing is a mess.

It has good looks, identity, inheritance, and talent, but it has one fatal flaw. It's too long-winded. I gave up on it when I read Chapter 8! There is a lot of explanation and analysis, but the protagonist can actually create the system by himself, which is a bit fake. But the most, the most gnashing thing is, Damn it, the author, you are going to die, why is nonsense accounting for 80%, you are going to die! Nong Gang and I, Nong doesn't look like the author of the novel, and we have the same narrator!

Come on, the author is great, the writing is beautiful, and the logical thinking is so strong.

It's a bit long-winded. I always write about the protagonist's smart thinking and strong logic. But this is about Naruto. The main focus is on ninjutsu, blood-stained wiring, and the battle with the protagonist. It's not about how smart the protagonist is. If that's the case, it's better to watch Conan fan fiction.

Good fellow Hokage, why don't you just be honest? You bring a Shinigami, I won't say anything about the abilities of pirates, but your whole prehistoric life, is that the same level, the jade disk of good fortune is synthesized into the innate spiritual root? An innate treasure? So awesome and still playing with Naruto's balls, I'm speechless