My Bug System

This book can be read by those who are new to novels. Old bookworms will definitely not be able to read it, but newcomers still can't understand the first 3 chapters, so this book is basically useless.

How many chapters have you persisted in?

You are all awesome. I admire you little brother. I want to ask you which document you went to read. I only have chapter 7 here, but you all mentioned more than thirty chapters. Ox

First book review! It's the first time I've been so far ahead, so I'll give you 5 points to commemorate it. I haven't read the book yet, but the introduction is quite interesting.

Except for the first three chapters, some chapters are okay. The plot structure is relatively complete and the content is relatively complete. Except for the logical thinking of the characters in the early novel, which is not very perfect, this novel can be said to be in the middle-to-lower range.

You can read more books by great masters and see how other people write their beginnings, because your writing is a bit confusing and difficult to understand. At the beginning, you write that the protagonist uses the system to buy something, which is nothing, but after he buys it, he suddenly meets a woman, and then comes the invincibility bonus and seal, which makes it difficult for readers to understand what it means. Then you write that the protagonist is the reincarnation of Daluo Jinxian, and forget about reincarnation. In the later stage of writing, the protagonist knows the truth about the system and has the same strength as the system maker. What is written here is too fake. I suggest the author to continue writing. When writing a new book, he should write a book of the same type as this one, so that he can compare the bad points and learn from similar books written by other great masters. Author, you can definitely write better. I wish the author an early success (author, don't be angry, I am telling you my feelings)

In fact, this book is well written, but it is too messy and exaggerated. The protagonist is so powerful in just a few chapters and it is too fake. I would like the author to read more well-written free novels. Don't ask why I am poor and have no money. By the way, don't read the works of great writers just to write a good book. Not all works written by great writers are good-looking. Read more profiles.

This book is disgusting! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

You are one of the best authors I have ever seen who writes anecdotes.

I watched a little bit, it's okay, but I don't know what the point is.