Daqizong

Very nice, keep up the hard work

It feels like telling a story, telling an ordinary thing.

The writing in the early stage was okay. The protagonist was on the third level of the Taoist Realm. After living outside the world, people in the Qi Sect who were promoted to the Taoist Realm were like dumplings. In less than a thousand years, they had been promoted a lot! You want to say that you have created a new technique and that it is possible to bring luck to your body, but who are these people in this bunch? The only person who practices the technique you created is the protagonist's disciple, the others are either his subordinates or the protagonist's women. What the hell are they? In the east, west, south, north, and central states, there are at least twenty or thirty first-class sects that are more impressive than Qi Zong. Qi Zong can barely be considered a second-rate sect. As a result, within a few hundred years, a lot of people from the Qi Sect were promoted, but none of the many sects saw it. Only the Lingbao Sect used a secret method to send two of them up. How funny! That's all, I won't watch anymore!

I think this book is pretty well written👍👍👍

Most of the previous works on immortality were about spiritual practice, alchemy, and healing the sick. This is the first time I read an article about weapon refining, which is fresh and attractive.

If the protagonist is not a time traveler, it is basically meaningless. Without the wisdom of modern people, how can we compare with others, and why should we reach the top?

1. Forced pretense 2. The plot behind is so cliche and it's all about the eldest lady.

Reading is a habit, checking in is an attitude, commenting is a kind of respect, and liking is a kind of recognition. 👻👻

My husband suddenly came back last night and found me reading a novel alone in bed. He actually told me that you are getting more and more beautiful, and he even came up and hugged me. At that moment, I felt so happy. My face was not very good before, but it was all the beauty of Ning Xin Yu. He even massaged my muscles and gave me a lot of practical advice. I just slowly learned to take care of myself there, and it helped me a lot.

If this book is well written, it is very likely that it will be able to become a god in one book. However, the author's level is indeed limited and falls far behind. It is a pity that such a good subject matter and system are missing. I have only read fifty or sixty chapters, but I really like the setting of this book. However, the author's level is too limited, and I deeply regret it. First, the sect is not written in a grand manner, and the rules are not written in a convincing way. Analysis: To be honest, the sect's places, buildings, personnel, forces, and sect's rules are a bit vague, and the layout is very small. The rules are that sect rules must be written, and managers can use their power to influence or even blind them, because they want to show the importance of strength, the cruelty of cultivating immortals, and the corruption of the world of immortals. Second, the level and distribution of immortal cultivation techniques and spell types. There is also the difficulty of cultivation and the difference between geniuses and ordinary people. Analysis: For example, the skill level is heaven and earth, black and yellow, and the spell attributes are metal, wood, water, fire, earth, wind, thunder, ice, light, darkness, and mutation. Cultivation speed is distinguished by the speed of absorbing spiritual energy, and there is also a promotion bottleneck. But what is more important is chance and luck. Third, the protagonist feels bad. People can change slowly, but there must be a big turning point at the beginning. For example, when the protagonist hears that Yin or something breaks his immortality and covets his reward, he should understand that in the end, he can only rely on himself. Moreover, the protagonist should pay more attention to inheritance from the beginning, and only learn about Hongmeng Baoqi later. Also, it's about covering up and restraining. With experience, you know you have to be careful every step of the way, but you still keep being "careless". Also, you don't have to be blinded by seeing a woman, okay? And it's actually not good to write the heroine early. Fourth, the overall structure can't be felt, but that's the problem. Sometimes simpler is better. From small to large, add some things to adjust the color, add some twists, and that's it. You can never change without departing from your roots! Maybe I'm being too harsh, but only by pursuing perfection can we do one thing the best.