My Super Divine Space

Here I would like to list three unreasonable points written by the author. First: How stupid must the male protagonist be to let the whole world know that you are the master of some supernatural space before you have absolute strength? Even if the country does not come to rob it, people from various forces in the country will not be jealous Second: When you travel to other worlds, who is not crazy about plundering? Don't worry about too many martial arts secrets. After all, you want to take the path of transcendence. Alas, you don't know how to create better skills. Third: It's too easy for you to get the energy to travel to other worlds! If you say that mental power can open the passage through time, do you think you are a person with great supernatural powers? In view of the above three points, your book is useless!

1. The character description is too naive. For example: The protagonist is an ordinary person. When he meets the Dragon Snake Tang Goddess for the first time, he can get started smoothly by pretending to be innocent. I won't explain the state of Tang goddess's martial arts and spiritual cultivation. Everyone knows what kind of person she is, and others can see clearly at a glance. 2. As for emotional scenes, everyone's feelings are different. I personally don't think it has any depth. 3 Generally speaking, everyone has their own way of writing the time travel flow in the early stage, so there's no telling. The middle period was chaotic, and the writing power was insufficient. It was not impossible to write about spiritual energy recovery, world cultivation, and alien plane conquest all at once, but it was just too messy. I didn't watch it later. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I became, so I gave up the book.

If the IQ of the pig's trotters is low, it is usually because the author is not good at writing, is too smart to write, and is difficult to control. As you can imagine,

This book should be called Silly Self-cultivation

Can't stop at all, it's a complete mess

What does it have to do with the pig horns if the protagonist dies?

What kind of dick thing? Why write so much nonsense in the first few chapters?

Junk books,,,......

I only read a dozen chapters and I was hooked. There are many places that don't conform to normal people's logic. There are also many rules that should be hidden and they are all fucking exposed. It's such a novice. I don't know the dangers of society. I can only say that the author's aura of reducing intelligence to the protagonist is too strong.

Why do humans always ignore what they have said and start to change the rhythm of harem style again when there is no heroine or only one heroine? ? ? In this way, you might as well have a novel to train or something. At least they are opening a harem openly. If you just want to watch a single heroine or no heroine, you can just ignore it. And you said that there is no heroine or a single heroine and you are ready to open a harem. Are you selling archways?