When the Demonic Tide Rises

It's not good-looking, it's just a time-travel story. I'm so long-winded, why don't you just write about the protagonist's time-travelling? What kind of nightmare is this? The protagonist is still fighting to the death. It's no big deal that he can't live in that house. He regrets wearing it.,,

I can't stand it any longer, so I'll just say this. I'll summarize what happened in the first five chapters. The protagonist dreams back to another world and controls "himself" to go to the stable to pick up the magic potion. In the end, it's just a little bit of plot. How many words did you write, and a lot of explanation of the background of the story? Isn't it too verbose to explain this? You've read so many novels, don't you know that the most taboo thing about novels is that they must be word-counting? Who would care about the background of your imaginary world in great detail? Why not simply explain it and go straight into the plot? As a result, I watched the TV series for two minutes, various advertisements, star introductions, and the director's speech for half an hour.

The thinking is clear, the logic is tight, and it is crisp and clear. When reading otherworld novels, you will see the macro-world background. This is a brand-new world that is unconventional, and the cultivation system is novel and reasonable. Upgrading to pick up girls is boring for someone like me who has been reading novels for more than ten years. However, these two aspects of this book are written naturally. It is not like some novels that forcefully pretend to be pretentious and mean-spirited as soon as they become popular, and there is no nymphomaniac to make up the word count.

The hang-up is getting bigger and bigger... I started to feel a little uncomfortable after reading about Chapter 91

Halfway through, I saw Return to Earth, and I didn't have the intention to read it. I endured the nausea and read on, but ended up starting to cultivate immortality again. The author must know that double time travel often leads to very ugly deaths. If the author wants to write a book as long as starting from scratch, I would not recommend writing a double time travel. The reader has adapted to a new environment, and is suddenly hit back with a hammer. It is very uncomfortable. How can I put it, this book is like a delicious cake, but when you eat it halfway through, there is a dead mouse. If you endure the nausea and continue to eat, no matter how delicious the cake is, it will feel psychologically different. The above is my opinion only.

The content of the story is okay, but there is too much nonsense. Everything has to be explained, everything has to be explained, and all the ideas have to be explained. One thing is just explained, which is several times the number of words in the main story. It is really impossible to read it. It may be okay to read dozens of chapters, but if the whole book is like this, I can't accept it.

It is a rare good book, but I feel that this different world is written with too much passion. From the beginning to the end, it lacks a sense of reality. Not like a real world.

Come on, say it with me, "If I mess up my review of this book, I won't be allowed to do it."

The writing is pretty good, but I can't stand it.

The writing in the early stage is indeed very good, and then you just go back to the earth. What kind of witch is there to do the doomsday and immortal heroes? The nondescript early stage writing has a good sense of substitution.