Game of Thrones: Knight of Glory

It is completely a fantasy template of a Chinese novel in the guise of Game of Thrones. It is very boring. All the close friends and loyal ministers around the protagonist are women! If you go to a place to attract a woman's attention, you can't have all your vassals be women from now on! Hehe, the Countess' relationship is also written inexplicably. If you know that the protagonist doesn't like her because she is fair-skinned, beautiful, with a slim waist and long legs, then you shouldn't engage in such ambiguity. Moreover, I always feel that the author wants to write Little Rose to the protagonist as his wife. I really feel bad! Little Rose is only three or four years old! Of the ten Game of Thrones games, nine and a half want to marry Little Rose, and eleven are fighting against Dragon Mother. I fully understand the old idea that Chinese men cannot bow to women, but as a hunter, the protagonist is accepted by the nobles too easily! If class is broken down so easily, the protagonist won't be able to take his turn, or else he'll write about being born into a noble family! Many things are idealistic and unrealistic! If you want to say that it has the halo of the protagonist, then I would say that the writing is not smooth enough! All in all, it makes me feel awkward! What is the protagonist going to do?

The protagonist simply sparred with someone for a minute, and it wasn't a fierce fight, so he was exhausted, and he could fight dozens of people in front of him. You are 1.9 Meters tall and have a body like a bear and you are said to have no strength. Are you a bamboo pole? "Originally, his height was the same as most hunters in Bai Village, only about 1.7 Meters, but now he has grown to about 1.9 Meters. This height is already outstanding in Bai Village. You even have to lower your head to enter Bain's tavern. And as his weight increases, his body becomes bigger and bigger. From a distance, he looks like a bear walking upright."

In Duncan's third Mysterious Knight, the prize for the runner-up in a tourney held by Blackfire supporters was 30 gold dragons; and when Ned Stark took office, Robert held a tourney for him with 20,000 gold dragons for the runner-up, 40,000 gold dragons for the champion, 20,000 gold dragons for the melee champion, and another 10,000 gold dragons for the archery champion. There may be reasons for currency devaluation, but essentially the meaning of the Prime Minister's Tournament is that Robert Baratheon has no moderation or rationality in spending money, and the number of rewards he offers can only be described as ridiculous. In aGoT Chapter 65 Arya 5, freshly baked fruit tarts filled with fruits cost 3 coppers each. This number is probably normal. Duncan's dinner in Duncan 1 only cost "a handful of copper coins". In Tyrion 4, aSoS Chapter 32, when King's Landing is about to face a siege, 6 copper coins (should refer to bronze stars) can only buy a honeydew melon, and a silver deer can only buy a bushel (more than 30 liters) of corn. What is written here is the inflation caused by the war. In the last chapter of aSoW, 100 gold dragons are the ransom for normal nobles; but in Chapter 37 of the same book, Edmure offered a reward of 1,000 gold dragons to capture James. It is also clearly expressed here that Edmure does not hesitate to spend a lot of money to search for James. Another example is that in the chapter above Brienne, Tully fined the baker 50 silver deer for mixing sawdust in the bread flour, and used flogging to make up for the shortfall. This seems obviously too harsh. In the same chapter, Tully orders prostitutes to have their private parts washed with lye, which could have been fatal under the circumstances. The meaning of the text is that Randyll Tarly's "justice" is not the real justice with clear rewards and punishments, but the hypocritical "justice" that is harsh, ruthless, and lacks standards. 50 Silver deer cannot be regarded as liquid funds that ordinary bakers can come up with. In the face of the seemingly "normal" purchasing power/exchange rate, sometimes there are some unreasonable situations: in the prologue of aFoC, Emma, ​​the maid in the Quill Bottle Tavern in Old Town, sells the first night of her daughter Rose for 1 gold dragon. In Duncan 1 Mercenary Knight, the price of a knight's horse is 3 gold dragons and some silver deer (a total of 750 silver deer); and the knight's armor is worth about 800 silver deer (4 to 5 gold dragons). Littlefinger claimed in aGoT that 100 gold dragons can buy a dozen barrels of fine Dorne wine (you know, Brienne's ransom is only 300). Purchasing power here is completely erratic. A dozen barrels of Dornish wine can buy twenty war horses? In other words, a dozen barrels of fine wine can arm ten knights? I'm afraid this isn't Ambrosia. Of course, the seasons in Westeros itself are a big deal. In the spring or late fall, it might be difficult to maintain military horses during the winter, and food and animal prices would fall accordingly in the summer. But even considering this situation, there is the following problem that cannot be explained by the characteristics of specific seasons in Westeros nor by POV perspective bias: For example, the asking price of the Second Son Group is really too low. Tyrion Lannister's promise to the Second Sons is 100 gold dragons for each sergeant, 1,000 for each officer, 10,000 gold dragons for the inkwell, and 1,000,000 gold dragons for Brown Ben/Brown Ben for a good castle (lordship title). Tyrion thinks this is a large amount, but since he doesn't really own the wealth of Casterly Rock now, it doesn't matter if he gives out fictitious assets. But is this really a 'large amount'? You know, the wealth of some wealthy families in Westeros is on a 'fantasy' level. Such as Highgarden, Casterly Rock and Old Velaryon. The throne was in debt to six million gold dragons when Ned arrived in King's Landing, three million of which Tywin lent to Robert. The High Sparrow said that the church's debt was nine hundred thousand, so Tyrell, the Iron Bank and other Essos merchants lent a total of about two million gold dragons. Kevan Lannister made it clear during his political involvement that 'if an agreement cannot be reached with the Iron Bank', he could 'pay off the debt with Lannister gold'. After fighting a War of Five Kings, and after lending the throne three million gold dragons, Kevan (note that Kevan is not 'Lord Lannister', Cersei is Lady Lannister, Kevan is not even the Warden of the West) still believes that Casterly Rock can use liquid assets to repay its two million debt at any time. In contrast, Brown Ben holds the potential future Lord Lannister, and the asking price is... One hundred thousand gold dragons? The same applies to Salado Sand. Salladhor Sand, a great pirate with 30 warships (compared to the 100 warships of the Iron Fleet, the Redwine fleet has 200 warships; the running team book claims that the royal fleet has more than 210 warships, but only 80 are rowing ships/galleys. There are some implications for the medieval navy. Friends who know about it should be well aware that the maintenance cost of a rowing boat is disproportionately higher than that of a sailing boat, and Salladhor does not 'dock' the ship and only enter the water when needed, but sails on the sea all the time. This is an extremely large fleet). The price offered to Stannis is... ···Only 30,000 gold dragons per month. Stannis's brother Robert, who spends a lot of money, promised the winner 40,000 gold dragons in the Prime Minister's Contest! Littlefinger speeds up Ned's purchase of the golden robe (which was originally commanded and supported by him, and the commander is his person). The asking price also requires an additional gold dragon for each person. Caitlin's 'tip' to the rowboat paddlers, a silver deer for each paddler. Salado and his thirty warships only cost 30,000 gold dragons every month... It is well known that a lack of wealth leads to a lack of imagination.

The three golden chapters were written by the author as three chapters of persuasion to quit.

Is the author female? This is a good and fun Game of Thrones fanfic, and it's in the top three of the ones I've read so far. But it was so focused on female supremacy that it was so annoying that I stopped reading several times. Stories where the heroine is much taller than the hero makes them look like mother and son. The heroine has inherited the souls of her ancestors, causing her character to undergo unpleasant changes. Especially the one that requires him to separate from the hero and go to another continent to establish a kingdom. I didn't particularly like or hate the heroine before, but this heroine really annoyed me. There is also a harem story that comes to a different world but does not have a harem. I started reading Chinese novels because I like Chinese characters. But this novel was a disappointment. It seems that there is no difference between the heroes of Chinese novels and Japanese novels. There were many women around him, but he only chose one.

I wrote that there is already such a huge force in the back, why are you still playing house with Little Rose and the three idiots? Why do you still hide at home and play Ruozi's strategy when you have three dragons? Can't you just push it equally? In the early stage, Pig's Foot followed the macho genre and the writing was okay. In the later stage, he became a lord of a certain force. Why was he so hypocritical and his character collapsed?

I think it is well written. The transformation of Goldfinger in this book from the peak of mortals to demigods to killing gods is very natural. Unlike other Game of Thrones fans who are threatened by the forces of gods every day, the author Martin said that there are no gods but magic. Since you have written about gods, make a more powerful Goldfinger. Otherwise, how will you fight with gods?

After reading a few chapters, the setting at the beginning is poisonous. Whether it is that the protagonist did not apply for hunting and was almost killed by the lord, or the protagonist was seriously injured later and chose heroes randomly, there are some pitfalls! It's better not to write it at all, because if you write it, it will look annoying! Looking back, I found that it was 90%... A nine-rate idler. He chased from the human world to Kunlun, and then watched the steampunk behind it. Although he only saw a small part of it, I can only wish the author good luck!

It contains serious private goods and women's rights. Women's strength, vision and intelligence are more powerful than men's. The key is that the women in the original novel do not reflect the vision of those powerful women in the author's book. Just write it randomly in summer.

The appearance of this male and female protagonist really dissuades me.