I Will Live Forever in Daqin

I can understand that the new king needs talents when he just takes the imperial power, but I always feel that the author has written the plot too hastily. Just because he met Shang Yang, is he just licking the protagonist? After asking a few questions, he gave it to the Imperial Master? Although the writing is good, the way you write it makes it difficult for readers to follow the plot!

The protagonist in the previous part is really too conceited, and the corners of his mouth are raised at every turn, which really makes me want to quit.

I feel so out of the blue. He became a national advisor in just a few words. He didn't follow the original character design. He was confident and shining for no reason. He was just a small soldier and commanded 2,580,000 yuan. It was the Warring States Period at that time. Without a famous family background and teacher, he couldn't be like this. It shines brightly. I wonder if it will turn into a harem-acquisition stud article. I feel that the article is suspended in the air and has no meaningful words. After reading the first ten chapters, the theme is "I am the best". It is not easy to write words. I will give it an average. It is just a historical article. Regardless of whether it is a time travel or parallel world, you still need to read more historical materials or documents, and think about how to write in a way that makes people empathize with you instead of making you feel embarrassed. For example, if the topic is about living in the Qin Dynasty and being immortal, I suggest you read Er Dong. Shui Shou's biography is about life from the Qin Dynasty to modern times. His writing style is worthy of a regular publication of the anecdotes of the polling bureau. The protagonist is also very awesome, but the writing feels like it is natural. The author should read more other people's articles. There are also some particularly well-written stories in Kuaishou, such as Lin Muer's life of making money, as well as Bei Song of the Christmas Scarecrow and Mantang Hong. They are all about parallel ancient times that caused earth-shaking events, and they are particularly powerfully written.

It's not interesting, there is actually a world of cultivating immortals?

With Shui Yibo's experience, it's not too far away from level five.

Why are there so many "haha" as modal particles in this book😱

Just messing around, it's not too late to go out if you have past life experience.

You can write it, follow this idea, come on, come on

Crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame

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