Qin Gong

Thank you to all the readers who have read this book. Thank you for your support, and also thank you to the readers who have been sending recommendation tickets, monthly tickets, and rewards. Thank you. I send you the best blessings in the world!

The author's writing is really good, I didn't even take a nap. I finished it in one go. I don't ask the author to update it. I just hope that the author can write about returning home in glory.

Until now, when I read Chapter 8, the protagonist is written like a fool. He has all kinds of disgusting relatives, and even the protagonist's parents treat the protagonist as a fool. Can't you, a time traveler and a plug-in, behave a little more normally? You have always been abused for the sake of abuse.

After reading it for so long, I still feel that the uncle is disgusting. It's okay if you don't want him to die, but can you stop writing about him so often? I want to ask you, did you write this book to disgust readers? How many chapters has that uncle written? Let me ask you, you said this is the bottom line of the protagonist, can your bottom line not keep jumping out? I won't follow this book anymore, bye.

I read eight chapters. First, the writing should not use too many modern vocabulary. It is originally a novel, and there is a problem if it is written in pure classical Chinese, but at least it must be written with the charm of ancient Chinese. Second, the protagonist is a second-generation person. I never think that older people necessarily mean they are sophisticated, profound, wise and wise. But this is a novel, and a protagonist who has lived like a street rat for fourteen years is very unpleasant. The author's explanation is to hide one's clumsiness, but I haven't seen a place where the protagonist needs to hide one's clumsiness. The family background is not serious enough that the protagonist will be eliminated as a normal ordinary person, and the same is true at the national and social level. Yes, normal ordinary people do not need to be famous, do not need to invent, do not need to be a child prodigy... I did not expect that a person who has lived two lives and has a golden finger will live a role that is full of contempt. In a certain chapter, I remember the author described how the protagonist looked thin, but was actually very strong. He had to be careful not to be seen when dragging the body, and also mentioned that this was the reason why he was able to become a master after three years. So, can't you use this energy to contribute to the family? At least in addition to knowledge, let the parents realize that the protagonist himself has the ability to survive. Is this a situation that will happen? I guess that the protagonist's dealings with corpses may be related to some official person, or the subsequent plot, or the ability alone requires corpses. The dead souls may be inseparable from corpses, but why is this? Is the money from a dead person as good as the money from working? Does the dead person have to be moved frequently and in front of everyone? Do you have to put yourself in the gutter? Is this the thinking of a normal person? I read the introduction and the author said that the protagonist should leave Qi State. The hidden part of the protagonist said that he was afraid of being killed and could not leave. But you need to know one thing. Did the protagonist foresee that he was going to leave Qi State? Again, the protagonist had no foresight, so why did he crush himself in the smelly mud? Expanding another branch, the protagonist just wants to become a minister and general in Qi State? Why not? If the operation is good enough, the reputation is collected quickly, and the status is promoted quickly, doesn't it mean that the family cannot be an absolute threat? Fourteen years, a second generation, a golden finger. In that era, perhaps the appreciation of noble people was a road to the sky, and it would be too slow to reach the top, so how could we end up in this situation? Third, the plot is old-fashioned and the characters are old-fashioned. I've only read eight chapters, and the one that left me speechless the most was the 'little loli'. Why are these roles filled by women who are beautiful, or who will be beautiful when they grow up? Young masters, nobles, veterans, and merchants can all be opportunities for the protagonist to climb up in a depressing situation. Why are they all such quirky little girls? It's not well described... I complain about this with the same feeling of being speechless after reading other novels. I won't talk about my family background. There are many of them and they are quite easy to use. But sometimes it would be good to write about a family that pays for each other (not big, just two or three brothers, they can have quarrels, but they will speak up for their brothers, parents, nephews and nieces in big events or at certain times). Of course, it doesn't fit in with this book. Four, early stage or overall. A sense of refreshment can be obtained through early depression and late rise, or a sense of accomplishment when the protagonist goes from humble beginnings to the clouds. I can recommend the official Wei Heifu of Qin, the heroic Guo Peng, my Zhao Han, and even Zhao Kuo who picked up the Emperor of Qin...

Wu Anjun felt that it was not enough. Bai Qi made the generals of the six countries not dare to be enemies. In the Qin State, Bai Yan felt that he was not close to Wu Anjun. I beg all book friends, please write down what you think is the best title for you, bring a sword and give it a thumbs up.

When writing about the undead, there are fairies and ghosts, demons and monsters, heaven and earth. A Qin Gong requires both merit and use. Wouldn't it be better to live forever directly?

If you don't want to check the history, you can make up your mind and change the name instead of relying entirely on imagination and TV series. You don't really think that TV series can be used as a reference, do you?

Every once in a while, these authors either catch a cold, their wife gives birth to a baby, or they break an arm or a leg. Anyway, just rest 🤗

After reading these chapters, I don't know whether Bai Yan can flood the beams, but you have indeed succeeded in flooding the readers.