Restart Life

In the past, I wrote "I" and "The Rise of the Writers of the Republic of China", and I liked them both. There are some personal works of the author in them, but they are not excessive. Especially in "The Rise of the Writers of the Republic of China", the protagonist has foresight and is a literary giant of the generation, but he still cannot control the general trend and has a good sense of proportion. But this work doesn't work. The protagonist's thinking is a bit counter-intuitive. He travels back to high school in his forties. Instead of studying or making money, he first targets the female classmates around him. And his behavior pattern is also very awesome. First, he flirts with someone who is "really a little goblin" and is extremely greasy. Then he deliberately takes someone to ride in the worst and bumpiest car, hoping to create a "suspension bridge effect," but this behavior is too outrageous. In the car, he also commands the other person to share a pair of headphones with him, this. . . I even wonder if you are going to become the Dragon King and the domineering urban special forces soldier in the next second. This book will become a watershed in Wang Zijun's creation. He has gone downhill.

Overall, I think it's okay. It may not have that amazing feeling, but in this era of urban rebirth and poor online writing, Lao Wang's book can still be regarded as a good source of food. It's just that it's a bit watery in the later period and doesn't have the wonderful feeling of the early stage. It can still be read (it's really not as good as Dr. Ma's).

It's tasteless and it's a pity to abandon it. It looked okay at first but I almost didn't care after I went to college. How many pages did it take to write the game "Three Kingdoms"? There is also the question of the heroine: Is it okay for you to have as many heroines as you want in your harem? Can she accept the way you described Guan Guan's character and family earlier? Huan Tao is not flattering. Why don't you just focus on your kidneys and not your heart at the beginning and do whatever you want, but now you're doing this? Also, the commercial writing is really incomparable with the Wild Age. I can barely watch it just because of the writing style and other characters. I really can't watch it anymore lately.

Is this the starting point platinum level? Of course I couldn't write it, but what I want to say is that this emotional line is so embarrassing that it can deduct three bedrooms and one living room. When the heroine first appeared, she said yes, sorry, thinking that she wanted to establish a male protagonist who would not lick the dog. Later, other people chased the heroine, and the heroine was annoyed. Then the hero directly targeted the heroine. Do you want him to be his girlfriend? It's too purposeful, so I can't write an article, but I think the emotional line between the male and female protagonists should be attracted to each other rather than done purposefully.

Seven-star review, the whole article is watery, and it's very watery. Like chicken ribs, they are tasteless when eaten and a pity to throw away. .

I was originally disgusted with Tao Xue, but it was okay to be a passerby. There were characters more attractive than her, and they even opened a harem specifically for her. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. Coupled with the writing of journals, Lao Wang is no longer the Lao Wang he used to be. He has given up on it.

Rebirth doesn't want to make money quickly but hangs around a high school student? ? ? Have you just returned to urban literature and are you ready to write this kind of b-stuff? ? ?

I've read Chapter 103 so far, and it feels pretty good.

A high school senior who uses dirty words? A high school senior who doesn't study hard? Did you think it was junior high school? Everyone has passed the exam in high school, so who doesn't work hard to get into college? Falling in love in senior year of high school? This novel is completely a game novel. Write about the game at length. Bad review

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