I Come from Taoyuan

This can be regarded as a different kind of power. After all, he is no longer a human being and becomes a saint in place. The writing is excellent. The enemy will retaliate with revenge, and you will repay with kindness. Very good quality. Forget it, I can't compile it anymore, others have brought people to the door, and they are specially called Holy Mothers. Fortunately, they have traveled through the past. Don't talk about saving anyone. Is there any cause and effect between the dead people in the village and this group of leading party? When I don't have the strength, I don't talk about it. When I have it, I kneel down and lick it. They are all extraordinary, yet they kneel down and lead the party, so particular!

There are so many poisonous points that I can't stand it anymore.

Some people may say, what about the scum written by the author? It is undeniable that the author's writing style is still above the average level. This is an undeniable fact. But what are the author's shortcomings? It just feels like a state of mind within 50 chapters. When explaining the background, the whole thing is explained in a long sequence without any room for relaxation. In the form of memories, all are given in a few pictures, which directly fills the reader's heart. I won't go into details about this, but when he wanted to write about the key points, he just wrote it in a fussy way, unlike before. He was too pushy when explaining the background, and then the effect was not that good, and all he got was a lot of scolding. Some of the key tapes you use to cover up blockages are sometimes invisible to readers after they jump over them. I won't repeatedly emphasize that this is undeniable. I won't say more. The author must be aware of it, and it won't be of any use if I say it. I don't write in detail when I should write in detail, and I write a lot when I shouldn't write in detail. Isn't it a debt? I'm not going to scold you for what happened after chapter 50, but I'll simply say that after chapter 50, there really isn't such a small problem. There may be, but I didn't see it, but the problem has shifted to another kind of problem. I don't know if it's just me who sees it this way. Anyway, I feel that the author has a bit of a temperament that needs to be beaten. There is a mean atmosphere between the lines. I am not scolding the author. I am simply reading the text and reading what the author said. Let's write. Suddenly a writer comes and says that you have already made our readers' mentality like this, and you want to make it worse later. I really don't know, or what you were thinking at the time. I also have this evidence, and I also want to send it to you. It's really interesting. Anyway, the picture is below, and I really feel the aura of being mean. You know, why haven't I, the reader, seen the most serious book where the author complained, and it is only reflected in this book? Why are other books less popular among readers? Why do some readers follow the trend and criticize the books here? Why are you still squirting so happily? And you still don't feel like you're at fault? It may be that a large number of readers are depressed because of a small number of readers, and they are also affected in the future, and then they also talk about the author. But if the author has some brains and experiences it for himself, he will know why. The mentality of being screwed is like this, and then he is also affected by the unbeatable style. I can only say that it is a bit like that. I have also seen an author write a book with a sense of arrogance in the lines, but he is arrogant, and you have to experience it yourself. Anyway, I don't think your writing style in this book is bad. The writing style is okay, but it can't grasp the key points. Sometimes, oh, I really want to laugh!

The plot started to get addicted after the old cripple died, the plot was dragging, there were too many explanations, and the protagonist was useless

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It was originally a pretty good book, with good ideas and a good story setting. However, after the death of the old blind man, the author set up too many poisonous points, such as "not flattery but sincerity", "dog licking", and other suspected rare behaviors. . . . I can only say that this writing style is in vain.

I can't stand watching anymore. After coming out of Taoyuan Village, it was too boring and boring. The few events I wrote were not helpful to the pig's feet and the main plot. If I don't interfere in the affairs of the world, then just cut off Taoyuan Village. He was assassinated together with the military commander. He still inexplicably insists on the separation between immortals and mortals and insists on claiming his own extraordinary spiritual power before helping. The Marshal was hit in the arm by a bullet while escaping, but he tied it up with a rope and held it still. The pig's feet were so good that even if they were shot from the front, the skin would not be broken. Why bother? Why were he and Taoyuan Village still so energetic together? Worrying about the integration and livelihood of Taoyuan Village. If something happened to Taoyuan Village, he would solve it as soon as possible. Doesn't this count as meddling in human affairs? Writing a love story is also a drag, starting with the little bamboo horse in Taoyuan Village. Just ignore it and let her put aside her unrequited love. Later, she met the richest man's daughter, fell in love with her, and kissed her. Afterwards, she put a forgetful sticker on her to make her forget what happened on that day. She was afraid that the yin and yang would be separated in a few decades. Later, she turned around and hooked up with him again. When hooking up, he was not afraid of this or that. As well as the few incidents written, it was completely impossible to see how they added or helped the plot, pig's feet and his strength. His strength was basically basic. All of them were practiced on the mountain by himself. Since it is the Immortal Road of Immortality, can the pattern be relaxed? He has been doing things in a city for more than 200 chapters. The pig's feet are in the air-entraining stage, and even the strong ones with fetal movement can be killed. Basically, he is invincible under the Nascent Soul. There are some things and events that I don't know why I wrote them. I didn't see any advancement to the plot at the beginning and the end. Of course, I also brought out a few forces, but I still feel that it is a bit inexplicable.

The foreshadowing is too long. I really can't stand it after seeing more than 50 people. Also, why have the old routines not been changed and retained, and now the practice of brainstorming settings has become popular?

Just like the title, every day a group of people curse each other after reading Chapter 30, it's so annoying.

The first time a pig's foot worked with a swallow it was written as a paper crane