Blue Clouds and Rising Sun and Pines

The author writes about how many scriptures the protagonist has read, but the more he reads, the worse his character becomes. If you meet a character in the plot, you will become mentally confused. If you sleep and dream, life is not worth it. . What does the author want to express? ?

The plot is procrastinating, the writing is showy, and the most important thing is that the character of the protagonist is seriously inconsistent. As a child who rolled around in the modern society in his previous life, he looks like a naive teenager after his rebirth. Not to mention the dog in his previous life, he is not living like a human being in this life. It took five years to achieve a breakthrough state of mind, but in the end, his emotional control is not as good as that of his peers. Does the author treat the mysterious state of mind as a dog... Compared with ordinary people like Han Laomo, people hide their clumsiness in order to survive, and the protagonist is so desperate not to It frightens the master who has always cared for him. He has to hide his cultivation even if it affects his practice. It is still the kind of cultivation that others can see at a glance. As a result, the author may feel that the writing is too bad. He directly exposed his own realm for the sake of his fellow disciples, which is even more disgusting. Especially the protagonist's impulsive description of going out and hurting others for the sake of his fellow disciples, even if he doesn't know anything, is really difficult to describe...

It's just replacing Zhang Xiaofan as the protagonist, following the plot, and sleeping with the witch.

I didn't want to read it after reading Chapter 28, haha

It's not considered a fan, after all, the original novel doesn't have this person. I don't know, it should be of no type. However, this is the best written one, Zhu Xian's second creation.

I wouldn't like the heroine if she wasn't Lu Xueqi. Zhang Xiaofan and Baguio are the most beautiful love. I really don't like the fact that the author gave up Lu Xueqi to go to Baguio

When the disciples of Chaoyang Feng attacked the main hall of the Changsheng Hall, the peerless ferocious beast roared with ferocity, filled with evil energy, and raised its head toward the sky with a long roar! Then she walked slowly towards the female disciples of Chaoyang, her seemingly slow pace, but even under her huge body, she walked forward in an instant! Just when everyone in the Changsheng Hall thought that Qingyun was about to have internal strife, Senior Sister Xueqi took out a delicious bamboo shoot and said, "Little Tao Ya, be obedient~ There will be a lot of delicious bamboo shoots when you get home~" the strange Tao Ya roared His voice suddenly softened, and his eyes lit up, "Bang -?" Then he turned around and patted the Changsheng Hall disciples who were watching the show not far away into meat pies, bang, a pile of bamboo shoots, bang, two piles, bang bang bang! They all belong to me!

I absolutely must write it down, no more eunuchs! ! ! ! ! ! !

Do you think your writing is good? Are you writing an essay? What we are reading is a novel, not an essay.

Rubbish, the protagonist decided to revive Chaoyang Peak, but ended up colluding with the Demon Cult? Not wanting Zhang Xiaofan to make the same mistake again, he fell in love with Baguio instead. Really awesome