Great Sage Litian

The martial arts, cultivation system, and writing are all okay, but there is something wrong with the thinking of this book. The article mentions ☞On the roof above, the purlins and rafters are neatly arranged, like unbreakable rules, supporting the operation of the entire world. ☞What I see now is that the protagonist gradually becomes a member of the rules and is assimilated. The characters in the book are inhumane and behave violently. If you read too much, it will affect you. It is better not to read.

Very well written before! It's just a bit depressing to watch! Slow down first

How to say it. This novel. He's just a pseudo-protagonist. Except for the immortality of the protagonist. Nothing else. There are no god-level techniques. There is no grandpa. The writing is so true and realistic. It doesn't feel like a cool article at all. It's like being an ordinary person and growing up along the way. Qiyu is not as awesome as others, which is very realistic. But looking at it will give readers a sense of depression. Readers don't read novels just for pleasure. The protagonist in this novel is so miserable. I have read many novels. That is the protagonist of time travel. They are all fucking miserable, but the protagonists are all fooling around. Everyone said it was probably the worst. How miserable. This protagonist is the most rubbish. But no one said it was a misfortune, no, they didn't say that the novel was not well written. Writing, plot, etc. Anyway, I've read two to three hundred of them now. It all feels pretty good. Except there is no real protagonist treatment. The rest of the plot writing is pretty good. Just like an ordinary person who has his own opinions and thoughts, he is not a virgin. Generally speaking, this type of writing. Much like reality. Good!

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Learn martial arts <Secrets, money> You must not do anything. If you don't have money, what can you use to polish your body? Those who are good at martial arts have to eat meat for a big meal. Xiao Feng eats 18 pounds of beef for a meal and needs a jar of wine. Wu Song does the same. If you don't value money, why should you learn martial arts? When poor people learn martial arts, they will fight and kill all the way. What are you writing here JB

The writing is very real. Some novels nowadays make the road to immortality too easy and boring. Real cultivation of immortality should be like a country at war in real life, where everyone takes every step.

I think the beginning is particularly outstanding. Although the background of the story is relatively real and depressing, the tenacity and stability of the protagonist make people feel reassuring, and they feel that even if a person like him is at a low point, he will rise to the top sooner or later. But I personally feel that it would be better if the protagonist had more confidence and dominance.

Why learn swordsmanship? Isn't the sword bad? I'm tired of reading almost every novel about swordsmanship. I originally read this book about using swords, but now I've changed to swords. I don't want to read it anymore...

It's hard to comment, the front part is very good, why do you forcefully lose your cultivation level after ascending to the upper realm? Just drop it, you must have spent too much water just to restore your cultivation level. It has been more than forty years since I saw the recovery of Shidoji in the middle stage, and it was said that it will be restored to the late stage in another ten years. I. . . . Didn't it say before that Buddhist enlightenment can restore the body and that it can be fully recovered within a few to ten years? I seriously doubt your word count. The Daoji stage is just about those trivial things, which are no different from the Qi training stage in the lower realm. I wrote them over and over again, and I was speechless. A dozen chapters would be enough.

I don't like the author's style. I don't have a **. I will read it, but I won't vote for recommendation again.