The Beginning of Panlong: in the Name of the Father
About This Novel
To this day, former reincarnation Hogg doesn't know why he traveled through time and became the protagonist's father. However, he knows that his wife is his wife and his children are also his children. If someone wanted to take away his wife and make his children orphans - he would never allow it. In order to protect his wife and children, the traditional old man set a small goal: first become a holy dragon blood warrior!
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Official(29)Scraped 3d ago
It's so damn watery! Author, are you comparing yourself to others or are you comparing your word count? Most of the people who can read your novel have read the original work, so let's not talk about it! Too watery! And I feel good about myself!
There is really a lot of nonsense, my imagination is wild, and I don't even know what type of novel I am writing.
There is really a lot of nonsense, my imagination is wild, and I don't even know what type of novel I am writing.
What *** wrote is a lot of nonsense🤔😌😴
come on
The last one is getting better and better, I hope you can stick to it.
Too much nonsense and unattractive. It puts too much pressure on the protagonist at the beginning. It's not like a qualified novel.
There is too much nonsense, why are you always copying things from the original work? If you can explain it clearly in one or two chapters, you can write a dozen pictures, and most of them are unnecessary inner activities. To be honest, this is such a failure. I have always been limited to talking about it, but I don't know how to do it immediately. The protagonist is indecisive, and the goal of fighting against the multiverse was set for him in the early stage. Others write novels and reveal them bit by bit, but you set such an ambitious goal for him as soon as you show up, and it directly overwhelms the protagonist and makes him breathless.
I've read more than a dozen chapters, and it's all nonsense. It's too cool.
I've read a lot of Panlong fan fiction, and this one is really good.
The beginning is a bit nonsense, but the rest of the writing is okay
There is so much nonsense. After reading a few chapters, the plot is not all nonsense.
Large fountain pen
A lot of nonsense, all kinds of imagination, guessing this and this, I don't understand, with the protagonist's current strength, is it useful to understand it? Is that something the protagonist should consider now?
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Community(0)
Official(29)Scraped 3d ago
It's so damn watery! Author, are you comparing yourself to others or are you comparing your word count? Most of the people who can read your novel have read the original work, so let's not talk about it! Too watery! And I feel good about myself!
There is really a lot of nonsense, my imagination is wild, and I don't even know what type of novel I am writing.
There is really a lot of nonsense, my imagination is wild, and I don't even know what type of novel I am writing.
What *** wrote is a lot of nonsense🤔😌😴
come on
The last one is getting better and better, I hope you can stick to it.
Too much nonsense and unattractive. It puts too much pressure on the protagonist at the beginning. It's not like a qualified novel.
There is too much nonsense, why are you always copying things from the original work? If you can explain it clearly in one or two chapters, you can write a dozen pictures, and most of them are unnecessary inner activities. To be honest, this is such a failure. I have always been limited to talking about it, but I don't know how to do it immediately. The protagonist is indecisive, and the goal of fighting against the multiverse was set for him in the early stage. Others write novels and reveal them bit by bit, but you set such an ambitious goal for him as soon as you show up, and it directly overwhelms the protagonist and makes him breathless.
I've read more than a dozen chapters, and it's all nonsense. It's too cool.
I've read a lot of Panlong fan fiction, and this one is really good.
The beginning is a bit nonsense, but the rest of the writing is okay
There is so much nonsense. After reading a few chapters, the plot is not all nonsense.
Large fountain pen
A lot of nonsense, all kinds of imagination, guessing this and this, I don't understand, with the protagonist's current strength, is it useful to understand it? Is that something the protagonist should consider now?
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