
The Fourth Natural Disaster in One Piece
About This Novel
A new book has been opened - "The Ninja in One Piece" ... Volume 1 ~ Volume 3 (One Piece) Volume 4 (One Piece\u002F Life in a Different World from Zero\u002F Cutting the Red Eye\u002F One Punch Man) Volume 5 (to be determined: One Piece\u002F Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba\u002FFate\u002F Attack on Titan - tentatively determined, subject to change) ... It was temporarily decided to become a comprehensive manga for players, and the pirate chapter will be longer. Group: 645200189
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Official(45)Scraped 11d ago
Actually, I think what was written before is pretty good, but it's a pity that Luffy ate the Thunder Fruit.
Actually, I think what was written above is pretty good, but it's a pity that Luffy eating the Thunder Fruit was really a failure. I feel like Luffy's quality suddenly became lower? ? ? Who arranged Luffy's rubber fruit? Oda arranged it. Oda is a person who likes to ambush. Do you really think the rubber fruit is a garbage fruit? ? ? Many people speculate that Luffy's recovery and toughness, as well as his many skills that forcefully overdraw his body, have a lot to do with his Devil Fruit. Secondly, what did the author say that the protagonist has to eat natural fruits because he is not domineering? I asked Luffy what his most attractive trait was, that is, his courage to move forward and never be afraid of any difficulties. Instead of avoiding difficulties like this, is it difficult to find someone to learn Haki? Is it hard to put in the effort to study? It feels like the protagonist is just a small citizen, and his personality is definitely exposed. For a main god to do this, it makes people feel crazy! Secondly, the selling point of this book is the players, but the author always forcibly adds drama to the protagonist. Does Luffy eat the natural type or not affect the plot? No impact! On the contrary, players have eaten it, and even Enel's ability to maintain is more interesting. As a result, the touching plot of the protagonist is no longer broadcast live, and the fruits and plots for the players are no longer written. The protagonist is forced to add drama, which is dry and not interesting at all! I thought that those strong men from Zoro would have to leave sooner or later if they followed Luffy like this. Even though they imitated Luffy and tricked Zoda into boarding the ship at first. However, after being together for so long, you will always find that the protagonist is not worthy of his moral character. Sauron and the others are not really without IQ, but are swordsmen with very strong intuition. Are they really willing to follow such a captain all the time? Suo Da was very proud. In one episode, they all lost their memory. Suo Da said without hesitation that he did not want to be someone else's subordinate and left without hesitation. I hope the author can maintain the original style, write more about players, stop making Luffy OOC, and still be so crazy about his character, do more live broadcasts, and write about how players are moved by watching the plot. I am willing to watch it, at least there is still a feeling.
Kill Momonosuke, don't let him go
I'm so dizzy😜What on earth is this? It's so confusing😜😜😜
The content is confusing and the sense of substitution is not strong.
As mentioned above, the content is a bit too confusing, and the sense of substitution is not strong. The plot settings jump one after another.
The beginning is so messy, I really started writing wherever I thought, it was so messy.
The beginning is so messy, I really started writing wherever I thought, it was so messy.
Personally feel
What on earth is it about? My head hurts after reading a few chapters.
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From the beginning, it was a mess, I couldn't understand it, and I couldn't stand it anymore. Maybe my brain is not very good
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Official(45)Scraped 11d ago
Actually, I think what was written before is pretty good, but it's a pity that Luffy ate the Thunder Fruit.
Actually, I think what was written above is pretty good, but it's a pity that Luffy eating the Thunder Fruit was really a failure. I feel like Luffy's quality suddenly became lower? ? ? Who arranged Luffy's rubber fruit? Oda arranged it. Oda is a person who likes to ambush. Do you really think the rubber fruit is a garbage fruit? ? ? Many people speculate that Luffy's recovery and toughness, as well as his many skills that forcefully overdraw his body, have a lot to do with his Devil Fruit. Secondly, what did the author say that the protagonist has to eat natural fruits because he is not domineering? I asked Luffy what his most attractive trait was, that is, his courage to move forward and never be afraid of any difficulties. Instead of avoiding difficulties like this, is it difficult to find someone to learn Haki? Is it hard to put in the effort to study? It feels like the protagonist is just a small citizen, and his personality is definitely exposed. For a main god to do this, it makes people feel crazy! Secondly, the selling point of this book is the players, but the author always forcibly adds drama to the protagonist. Does Luffy eat the natural type or not affect the plot? No impact! On the contrary, players have eaten it, and even Enel's ability to maintain is more interesting. As a result, the touching plot of the protagonist is no longer broadcast live, and the fruits and plots for the players are no longer written. The protagonist is forced to add drama, which is dry and not interesting at all! I thought that those strong men from Zoro would have to leave sooner or later if they followed Luffy like this. Even though they imitated Luffy and tricked Zoda into boarding the ship at first. However, after being together for so long, you will always find that the protagonist is not worthy of his moral character. Sauron and the others are not really without IQ, but are swordsmen with very strong intuition. Are they really willing to follow such a captain all the time? Suo Da was very proud. In one episode, they all lost their memory. Suo Da said without hesitation that he did not want to be someone else's subordinate and left without hesitation. I hope the author can maintain the original style, write more about players, stop making Luffy OOC, and still be so crazy about his character, do more live broadcasts, and write about how players are moved by watching the plot. I am willing to watch it, at least there is still a feeling.
Kill Momonosuke, don't let him go
I'm so dizzy😜What on earth is this? It's so confusing😜😜😜
The content is confusing and the sense of substitution is not strong.
As mentioned above, the content is a bit too confusing, and the sense of substitution is not strong. The plot settings jump one after another.
The beginning is so messy, I really started writing wherever I thought, it was so messy.
The beginning is so messy, I really started writing wherever I thought, it was so messy.
Personally feel
What on earth is it about? My head hurts after reading a few chapters.
. . . . .
From the beginning, it was a mess, I couldn't understand it, and I couldn't stand it anymore. Maybe my brain is not very good



















