
Who Designed This Underworld Dungeon!
About This Novel
(Original title: Who designed this underworld dungeon) In order to survive, Gong Qiying, who unfortunately became the master of Thane Dungeon, had to build his dungeon into an incomparable "underworld" The door [cannot be opened from this side], [Teleport trap triggered] treasure chest, The 365-mile journey from the birth point to the BOSS room without any resting place, Monster knights with big bows on both sides of the single-plank bridge, The insidious Six who sneaks up on you around the corner, There are also cesspools, poisonous pools and hidden roads that must be appreciated... There are also masters such as Isshin Ashina, Furnace Knight, Passionate Golden Lion, Scourge Legion, etc. Who will bring you unexpected surprises! The flaming straight sword, the wet scythe, the left bow sword, the oath of gold and stone, and the flames give me strength. All kinds of unique rewards will make you happy! Gong Qiying: In my dungeon, the most important thing is for all the adventurers to have fun!
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Official(20)Scraped 2d ago
The idea is good, but there are too many things added to it, making it a hodgepodge.
. . . After reading the first chapter, would anyone really go to his dungeon if the protagonist designed it this way?
Personally, I feel that removing the food chapter would have no impact on the plot.
Can we add Honkai Thirty-three Heroes and Kamen Rider?
Things have changed since the invasion and the new strategy group.
Update, update quickly, if I don't see the follow-up, I will invade you😎
Can I add JoJo as a substitute?
If you're not familiar with the book, I suggest you read it, it's okay.
What can I say? It looks good so far. The author is good at copying comments.
The main focus of the dungeon novel with Soul Travel as its backbone is how people from another world deal with Xiao Gao's malice and how the characters use the unique technology of the other world to skip classes. Routine cycle: push the main line > characters appear > face the map's malice > old characters may appear > boss battle > clear the boss > new map As a different world game article, it is commendable to continue to describe content other than dungeons. After all, if you focus too much on writing only dungeon content, you will soon feel tired, and it will not be conducive to the subsequent transformation to introduce elements of the outside world. Although there are elements that integrate other works in the dungeon, such as Food Hunter, Hollow Knight, Dark Dungeon, etc., Most of them are just condiments, and they will eventually return to the soul game. Although the middle stage of the plot is relatively weak, it is still well written. It is worth reading now.
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Official(20)Scraped 2d ago
The idea is good, but there are too many things added to it, making it a hodgepodge.
. . . After reading the first chapter, would anyone really go to his dungeon if the protagonist designed it this way?
Personally, I feel that removing the food chapter would have no impact on the plot.
Can we add Honkai Thirty-three Heroes and Kamen Rider?
Things have changed since the invasion and the new strategy group.
Update, update quickly, if I don't see the follow-up, I will invade you😎
Can I add JoJo as a substitute?
If you're not familiar with the book, I suggest you read it, it's okay.
What can I say? It looks good so far. The author is good at copying comments.
The main focus of the dungeon novel with Soul Travel as its backbone is how people from another world deal with Xiao Gao's malice and how the characters use the unique technology of the other world to skip classes. Routine cycle: push the main line > characters appear > face the map's malice > old characters may appear > boss battle > clear the boss > new map As a different world game article, it is commendable to continue to describe content other than dungeons. After all, if you focus too much on writing only dungeon content, you will soon feel tired, and it will not be conducive to the subsequent transformation to introduce elements of the outside world. Although there are elements that integrate other works in the dungeon, such as Food Hunter, Hollow Knight, Dark Dungeon, etc., Most of them are just condiments, and they will eventually return to the soul game. Although the middle stage of the plot is relatively weak, it is still well written. It is worth reading now.
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Western fantasy theme, dungeon game planning, pseudo behind-the-scenes. The protagonist travels through time and becomes the owner of a dungeon in a different world. He uses his authority to do crazy things and play various games.




Overall score: 6.8 Category: Dungeon Construction Articles Introduction: In order to survive, the time traveler Gong Qiying transformed the dungeon into an underworld paradise that combines soul-based malice and Pokémon domestication. Through the campfire upgrade mechanism, adventurers are raised to become renewable leeks, and monster-stitching carnivals such as conquering cursed frogs with Poké Balls are carried out throughout, forming a "torture-upgrade-violent death" perpetual motion industry chain. Setting: 7.5, The soul trap, Pokémon capture and dungeon management are stitched together to create a sense of absurd comedy. The level design of the monster knight aiming at the single-plank bridge shows the ultimate bad taste of gamers. However, the world view is like broken pieces of tiles spliced together with 502 glue. The reaction of adventurers to the heaven-defying upgrade mechanism is comparable to collective intelligence, and the spiritual economic system has as many loopholes as sieve holes. Plot: 7.0, Each chapter is a new product launch of the underworld trap. The ideas such as the Furnace Knight squatting and hiding the treasure chest on the road are comparable to the game meme exposition. Stellan repeatedly attacks the street to form a black humor theme. However, the collective Stockholm Syndrome of the adventurers has no psychological change. In the later period, the "field master" Jack appeared and became a deus ex machina commentator. The Gourmet Prisoner chapter is suddenly inserted into "The Prisoner of Gourmet" and the setting is like a hardcore advertising placement. Writing style: 6.0, Japanese light novel complaining style is smooth and interesting, with "too late to mourn" and other jokes readily available. The scene of the monster knight sniping at the single-plank bridge is as intense as Hideo Miyazaki's high score, but the character creation is stuck in the paper man exhibition hall.




Put on hold Goldfinger: Dungeons can use monsters from previous lives Girlfriend: The protagonist becomes the dungeon master and relies on the memory of his past life to trap the brave (player) in traps such as Dark Souls. I'm tired of reading Chapter 233




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