Deconstructing the Weird

It's not easy to find a book these days, and it's also original, so go for it! There are too many people who just waste money right now, like so-and-so from Dou Po, so-and-so from Hokage, so-and-so from Siheyuan, and so-and-so from Douluo, there are so many of them that I really vomit.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a novel subject matter. It's difficult for ordinary people to handle it, and it won't give the protagonist the feeling of being invincible. The writing style is so good that I immediately felt oppressed by the ancient official. Leave your name before the fire.

The writing is really good. Although there are flaws, the flaws are not hidden. Whether it is the attractiveness of the story and the rationality of the layout, it is very good. The best among the best, I like it very much😘😘😘! ! !

What is this Huang De? To be honest, I have never taught the protagonist anything until now. After reading the table of contents, I will become a disciple in the next few chapters. It is too redundant. Until now, I am still on the road to being poisoned. I keep telling the protagonist that I am for your own good, can't do this, can't do that. Even the protagonist's ability to deal with ghost corpses is self-taught, especially the book of spells given by Wu Yong. If it's normal, then it's acceptable. Mainly everyone knows that the protagonist is a super genius, a monster, and peerless, especially in talismans. Just because one of the protagonists is terrible at martial arts, others have some complaints stuck in their hearts. Their cultural level is not high and they can't express them in words. It's very uncomfortable🤔 Of course, everything else is acceptable. I also gave some recommendation votes.

To be fair, when I saw the title of this book, I thought the protagonist was very powerful, and the protagonist was a proficient in literature. That is, the protagonist mainly relies on his own brain power, thinking, and auxiliary computer calculation functions to solve or develop supernatural phenomena. As a result, the content is that the computer takes the initiative, managing battles, and developing skill research, and the role of the protagonist is basically non-existent.

The logic doesn't make sense. There are many plots that don't have any foreshadowing in the early stage, but suddenly appear later. It feels like I just write whatever comes to mind. There are many typos and it's inexplicable.

The reason why I don't like it is that the existence of the Intelligent Brain is not much different from the system flow. It is a kind of invincible route. Because of the Intelligent Brain, the protagonist is a bit embarrassed. Everything is analyzed by the Intelligent Brain. He lacks self-judgment ability and self-growth. He is often managed by the Intelligent Brain. It makes people think that it can also be said to be a common problem of the System flow. Especially this kind of trusteeship makes the protagonist look useless. As for the subject matter, many people say it is novel, but I don't think so. Compared with similar articles, this article is old-fashioned. The advantage is that the author still has some writing skills. Although it is still the same routine, it will still give some newbies a refreshing feeling. Well, I am just looking for people who complain. I don't know how long I have been reading on QQ to be considered a big boss, but someone with three thousand or four thousand is definitely not considered a big one. . . Still too one-sided. . . Maybe this little time is enough for you to reach the master level in a certain category, but there will definitely be buts, and you can probably guess it even if you don't mention it. The advantages and disadvantages have been mentioned. It is a very normal comment from a book friend and a speech from a good young man. . . . . . Well, I'm pretty sure of that. The rest is up to you!

Is the sauce starting later? If I can't write a long novel, I will write a novella. The author doesn't understand it very well and will only blindly create an invincible image for the protagonist in the early stage. In the later stage, everything can deceive the protagonist, and then there are the typical one or two golden elixirs in the early stage. In the later stage, the golden elixir is not as good as a dog. The protagonist's abilities are suppressed, and then he makes a bunch of strange things to narrate, but he still doesn't fill in the holes after he's finished. Just open a map, and the people on the map are better than the protagonist, and then they say that they have studied it thoroughly, and then another one appears that the protagonist cannot study thoroughly, and they keep jumping sideways. What follows is repetition, opening the map, explaining the new combat power, which is not as good as a dog, making the protagonist stronger, and then opening the map again to encounter powerful enemies. Repeatedly, it really doesn't have the same smell as before. Pitfalls: "The will related to Little White Mao (will attribute, never mentioned again)" "Chun Dong's clone, Chu Qiu (don't know where to go)" "The virtual general (the woman and the fox in the soldier's cave)" "The gossip of the ancestor of the Zhuge family, I haven't learned or studied it" Welcome to add

It was really good to watch before, but now I can't stand it until Chapter 900. It keeps lowering the protagonist's IQ and brain power. The realm is so high that any illusion can be affected. Is the co-author the protagonist a loser? After so much experience, is it useless to have a strong heart? Moreover, it will only keep raising the level of the enemies and lowering the IQ and intelligence function of the protagonist. If you can't finish it, don't write it. Originally, it was good to finish with 5,600 chapters. I have to write the rest. The improvement of the ability in the early stage is so fierce. Once it is upgraded in the later stage, new powerful enemies will come. Each one can overwhelm the protagonist. Needless to say, everyone knows that this is the consequence of not grasping the speed of ability improvement. Now I have to write it to 900 chapters, which keeps reducing the ability of the protagonist. I really can't stand it.

Why not update it? So many days! Is the author still alive?