The Mysterious Mirror Immortal of Resurrection

The protagonist is a ghost. I wrote it in the early stage. The protagonist's abilities are not bad. Wei Mao's acting style is so..., How to say, drag, drag, tap, each protagonist has to show off. Brother, you are a ghost, not a loser.

You are all weird, brother, do you still want to breathe? Be serious

Several basic qualities or personalities required by the protagonist. Kill decisively. Not Holy Mother. The end justifies the means. Kill or eat people. No longer bound by human morality. Do things without hesitation. Very hot personality. (Even if the protagonist is very immature and has a soft personality at the beginning, but the protagonist must grow up. Otherwise, it will just look like. Tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk.) To cut weeds, we must remove the roots. (Including pregnant women, the elderly, and children. Including everything that will put the protagonist in danger) Don't be overflowing with love. (For example, saving people. It's not that you won't be allowed to save. But you must ensure your strength. If you are really invincible or very strong, save occasionally. It's acceptable.) Don't trust humans, this is the main thing. At last. Definitely, definitely. One thing to remember. Those who are not of my race must have different minds.

To be honest, your settings are very good Mirror strange, copy supernatural, mirror world, Originally a being who grew up invincibly, but what you wrote turned out to be very frustrating. This is true from the beginning to the middle stage! There are weird supernatural beings that you don't like. Even if you copy them and don't use them, you can still improve the supernatural powers. The protagonist just doesn't want to suppress his development. Then he was beaten up in various ways, including the hotel owner and the foreign ghost controller Kyle. . If you want a ghost mirror, you have countless opportunities to get it, so you don't go. Instead, you wait until Yang Jian becomes a ghost master and you get the ghost mirror. Go and grab it. Six! A sly who can grow invincibly as long as he has hands. You can't say that he grows quickly. It feels like anyone can defeat a wave of protagonists.

I don't know what the protagonist is thinking, but I know that if someone travels alone, he will not be easily integrated into the novel. In the eyes of the protagonist, he will be virtual. Let's talk about another setting: the devil from outside the realm. To survive after time travel, you must be ruthless and leave no one alive, otherwise you won't be able to survive. Since it is a fantasy world, all the time travels are caused by extraterrestrial demons.

The sea, you are covered in water

As I read it, I felt that I had deviated from the setting of a mysterious recovery. It was very strange.

Get rid of useless abilities, combine abilities to form new abilities, and then just write a new one. Useless ones can enhance the terror of their own ghosts in that pool.

There are a few things that are unreasonable. The protagonist lets go of the ghost controller from 20 years ago. When he goes back outside, he immediately says that he will work for the protagonist. I don't understand why such a powerful ghost controller from 20 years ago should work for the protagonist. There are also the younger brothers who will become fanboys as long as they join the protagonist. The supporting characters have no IQ.

The plot and writing are pretty good, but the main character is a ghost, and I said I no longer have any fear, but when I met a ghost, I actually used the word "extremely frightened", and I was still nervous when I met the person in charge, which was a little inconsistent. That's not to say that you can't be frightened and nervous, but the emotions should not be too intense, keep them to a certain level, and don't be different from before to after, so that you can create a good protagonist.