
Konoha: Kaguya's Notepad
by Yan Que
About This Novel
The history of the Uchiha clan will never repeat itself again, and the beast that breaks free from its chains will show its fangs. The caged bird of the Hyuga clan will be liberated, and the free bluebird will sing joyfully in the sky. The roots of Konoha that once existed will be uprooted, and the fire will burn without leaving any trace. The will of fire cannot save the corrupted village, only rising from the ashes can revive it. "So light the big tree called Konoha, and the burning tree will become nutrients for the new shoots." "And the world will still operate as usual." Kaguya said. ..................
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Official(6)Scraped 21d ago
Very ordinary, very similar to Japan... The game place insinuates that it refers to China.
Remember to check the information when writing data
Forty kilometers per day means crossing Asia in less than a year... The distance across Asia is 18,000 kilometers, not counting the terrain. How do you think you can cross Asia in less than a year? Don't give random examples.
It's pretty good, but the reference is too obvious.
It's not that I'm looking for fault, it's just too similar to the one who started escaping from Konoha, whether it's the staffing or the family. The time and situation are basically the same. Except for the plot supplement, there is also Shiraishi's IQ cheat, while Kaguya directly opens the cheat.
Dad, have you ever thought about a question? Before Otsutsuki came, there were: monsters (psychic beasts), demons (evil gods), ghosts, monsters (children born between humans and monsters, shark faces and teeth) witches/monks/onmyojis (Gamamaru's magic charm may be the product of onmyoji)
It's too merciful for you not to do anything to civilians. At least take out the ninja. Get rid of Ninjutsu inheritance. And that loquat cannot be from Senju. Because if it is a Senju, with that status, resources and bloodline, it is at least a quasi-shadow. The original died on the Night of the Kyuubi. It's not that easy. I was curious. When you have the power, you have to take care of the civilians. I don't know anything about civilians. In the beginning, there were no so-called civilians. They are just so-called refugees. And no strength. What an extraordinary world. Again, thoughts cannot keep up with strength.
not bad
Overall it's pretty good, but the details need to be paid attention to. Don't write down everyone's abilities incorrectly. For example, the Fourth Kazekage Rasa
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Official(6)Scraped 21d ago
Very ordinary, very similar to Japan... The game place insinuates that it refers to China.
Remember to check the information when writing data
Forty kilometers per day means crossing Asia in less than a year... The distance across Asia is 18,000 kilometers, not counting the terrain. How do you think you can cross Asia in less than a year? Don't give random examples.
It's pretty good, but the reference is too obvious.
It's not that I'm looking for fault, it's just too similar to the one who started escaping from Konoha, whether it's the staffing or the family. The time and situation are basically the same. Except for the plot supplement, there is also Shiraishi's IQ cheat, while Kaguya directly opens the cheat.
Dad, have you ever thought about a question? Before Otsutsuki came, there were: monsters (psychic beasts), demons (evil gods), ghosts, monsters (children born between humans and monsters, shark faces and teeth) witches/monks/onmyojis (Gamamaru's magic charm may be the product of onmyoji)
It's too merciful for you not to do anything to civilians. At least take out the ninja. Get rid of Ninjutsu inheritance. And that loquat cannot be from Senju. Because if it is a Senju, with that status, resources and bloodline, it is at least a quasi-shadow. The original died on the Night of the Kyuubi. It's not that easy. I was curious. When you have the power, you have to take care of the civilians. I don't know anything about civilians. In the beginning, there were no so-called civilians. They are just so-called refugees. And no strength. What an extraordinary world. Again, thoughts cannot keep up with strength.
not bad
Overall it's pretty good, but the details need to be paid attention to. Don't write down everyone's abilities incorrectly. For example, the Fourth Kazekage Rasa









