Wu Zhongxian

You've killed someone, but you don't allow other people's sons to trouble you.

The writing at the beginning was okay, but the writing at the end became worse and worse, and the writing was messy.

How many pieces did you say you wrote? More than 300 photos. It's even almost 400. But the main character is still so weak. It was like anyone could hit him. Now even some minions can't be defeated. This kind of cultivation is of no use. Even if he lives longer, he is still just a turtle.

Sometimes he's called Tao Xiaowu, and sometimes he's called Wang Zhenling. It's really annoying. Can't the author decide which one to choose?

The content is too confusing My brain is still a bit messy

These days, it's hard for anyone who writes traditional hard-core fantasy. After all, it's so tasteless and it's a pity to abandon it. I'm sorry that I'm the one who jumps directly to the finale... I have no choice but to give a reward to support it.

. I observe three seconds of silence for you. .

Very well written. It is also top-notch among ancient time travel novels.

There are so many typos and so few words.

I don't know how I got a score of over 7. After reading dozens of chapters, I feel like I'm not reading a novel, but a storytelling script. There's no need to change it, it can be used directly to tell a story!