Start with the Taoist Ancient Scrolls

It turns out that what Zhou Changqing watched was a pirated version. No wonder there were so many advertisements before. Facts have proved that it is better to watch the genuine version. However, Zhou Changqing seems to be quite lucky. From a visual inspection, this body should be that of a rich man.

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The writing is too poor, there is nothing that attracts me. Some modern words are easy to make dramas. Can the author use some caution? If a person travels through such a world of gods and ghosts and is so bold, he must be a hero in the real world. Don't tell me that a mediocre loser becomes a leader after traveling through time.

Writing novels now can either give you a sense of immersion. Either you write something that makes people happy to read. I don't feel it. Maybe I was jumping to watch it. But I skipped reading it, which proved that this book did not appeal to me. 🥱Looking at it makes me want to sleep.

The writing was okay, but I felt it was a bit inconsistent. I don't know if it's right or not, but Xianxiawen is. The author's writing style is also good, and the whole article should appear to be a text with a profound cultural atmosphere. But from time to time, the protagonist will say two popular slang words, which suddenly makes people feel full of black lines. It is the trend of the times and the feeling of the Internet society. Very abrupt. I felt very uncomfortable looking at it, it was so inappropriate.

Good books, good books, good books, it's not easy, I finally found a book that I can read! Except for the Fengshen List, the other rankings are all rubbish books!

Zhou Changqing was so angry that he had a heart attack and traveled through time because of the endlessly bouncing advertisements for this novel. No one else. He had just woken up and was on the way to drink medicine. But why is this taste so real? 🤔

The Xianxia is full of integrity, as long as it doesn't collapse, this could have been done

I don't know why it's always easy to read books written by this author. It's when other people appear in the middle and the scene transitions to the protagonist. It's easy to look at the back and suddenly wonder why it's written like this. What's going on? Then I have to look back. Although it is on the previous page, the transition is not very smooth, and it seems that the address words and modal particles are not used very well during the transition. This is not once or twice, but three or four times. It is very strange. Some of them are just a general word. He kidnapped him and who he took with him. There is no description. It reads very strange and there is no verb. Maybe I can't describe it, it's just weird. It was just a whole action. I read it carefully again. The whole article was very strange. The descriptive words and so on were very confusing. It was only at chapter 185 that I realized it. I hope the author can find a friend to help him take a closer look. I couldn't figure out what the problem was. Or if any readers have a look at the following paragraph and notice any problems, please tell me. Seeing that Zuo Xiaoqian had murderous intentions, Fu Qiaonian immediately shouted to Mr. Wang who had been taken away by the Yin Shen. But it was okay that he didn't speak. When he spoke, Mr. Wang seemed to know that his death was approaching, and his will to resist became weaker. "Not good." Looking at Mr. Wang who could turn into a demon at any time, Fu Qiaonian's face darkened. "Zuo Qianhu, please use a sharper sword and don't let Mr. Wang's body be shamed by the demon. When he arrives in the capital, Fu will definitely explain the reason. " Roar! Almost as soon as Fu Qiaonian finished speaking and Zuo Xiaoqian was about to jump out, a roar burst out from Mr. Wang's mouth. At this moment, Fu Qingfeng's scream came from behind. Zhou Changqing looked for the sound and saw a half-white old man, covering his arms full of blood, being chased by a group of soldiers. Seeing this scene, Zhou Changqing frowned. His mind immediately recalled the nearly 100 people in Wangjia Village who had been killed for no reason before. As soon as he thought of this, his body moved and he floated forward. The curved sword in his hand suddenly flashed with cold light. But just as his sword was about to fall, he heard a loud shout coming from the soldier's mouth. "Master Zuo, another powerful demon has arrived." "Bewitched by evil spirits?" As these words were heard, the long sword in Zhou Changqing's hand struck and the soldier flew away with one strike. At the same time, the evil-breaking talismans in his hand flew away.

Why didn't Mingming Youxin Sword not be used at the beginning? He had to wait until the enemy killed many people, and his own strength became stronger, so he used his ultimate move to kill. He even killed himself completely. You can't just use your big move when you're weak at the beginning, and half of the people in a city will be wiped out. You're going to use big moves, and you say you care about the world. It's disgusting.