Pirates Have Unlimited Physical Strength

I'm just a new author, so I can't be so rigorous about writing, plot, etc., To a very good level, but I will work hard, and I don't ask for a book to become a hit or anything. I just hope that if you like reading it, I will read it more, and if you don't like it, just leave. There is really no need to stop reading and leave a bunch of rubbish to break my defense.

Is it broken? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Do you know there is a group?

Author, have you been kidnapped? If it's you, update it If not, just update it

I just read Chapter 14, and there is a bit of a problem with the timeline. I want to say I forgot which part, but it's not a big problem. The most awkward thing is the conversation style, for example: Charlotte Katakuri looked at her brother in pain and couldn't help but plead: "Mom, brother Owen just wants to give you a surprise this time, but it's just that he can't beat four hands with two fists." Like this paragraph, all the idioms have been compiled, Charlotte Owen said in horror: "Please, mother, spare your life!" And here, these two paragraphs are just here, I won't give many other examples. This style of writing in One Piece seems awkward and awkward, but it would be fine if it were written in vernacular. Another thing is that the plot is not very rigorous, and it is a bit awkward to forcefully promote the plot. Just like the protagonist doesn't want his sister to be influenced by Roger, then it would be better to take her with him or guard her to prevent her from meeting Roger. In order to promote the plot, the protagonist will leave later due to some unavoidable reasons, or some accident will cause the protagonist's sister and Roger to meet and fall in love. It can be forced to push the blame to the correction of the world's will. It is really awkward to force an explanation. I hope the author can be more serious and rigorous in the future, otherwise sometimes I really can't blame the readers for not liking it. Many books start poorly, and I hope the author will write better and better later on. Pirates fandom is almost over-written, and it's not easy to occasionally find something slightly different, so I don't want you to end up writing it later.

Okay, update, update, update, when will it be released?

It doesn't feel like a time traveler, you just changed the character and wrote a 2

The author is a newbie and there is no other requirement. Just finish it. It is already good for a newbie to write like this.

Slow and refreshing, but not too much. Old bookworms can read it if they are not interested.

But the progress is too fast. It only takes a few dozen pictures to reach the first-class level. In the later stage, it may not be completed after a few hundred pictures.

Come on, come on, it's pretty good. Haha, don't wait too long. One Piece doesn't have many good books. I hope my relationship with Whitebeard isn't too bad. Hehe.