The Black Duke of Pirates

The Empress is the slave of the Celestial Dragons. You all know that the Celestial Dragons are so beautiful. I don't need to tell you that the Empress is so beautiful. And the Tianlong people don't care how old she is.

Stuart Bathory Mary Devil Fruit: Superman Type·Blood Fruit Power User Ability: Control living things and your own blood. If you absorb human blood, you can ensure that you become young and immortal (within a period of time) and your strength will return to your youth. Character prototype: The marriage of Queen Mary I of England and the Hungarian vampire countess Mrs. Bathory (the most beautiful woman in Europe) Thinking that this is one of the female characters, whether the author makes it a villain or adds a protagonist, I just hope the author can take a look at this setting.

The main reason is that the main character is not up to par in terms of strength, and it looks really uncomfortable. For example, he found a giant beast island to practice for 2 years without so much foreshadowing, and the author has such a powerful trade union that he didn't receive any good Devil Fruit. It's very interesting🤗 Alas, since you have such a big ambition, you have to hide your development. Now it is easy to invite people to join the enemy and let go of those with the golden fruit ability. You are sick. If you can't control it, what's the use of keeping it? You are so rich and there are conflicts. For example, now you are choosing Qiwu. The evil spirit of the sea is in front of you first, find a beast island to increase your strength, collect some Devil Fruits from the Chamber of Commerce, and be careful not to fall behind when you increase your power. The main character Devil Fruit has developed physical swordsmanship. Isn't it superfluous? Or just swordsmanship Devil Fruit or Taijutsu Devil Fruit. You can't chew off more than you can chew. No matter how much strength you have in the Shichibukai, you can kill Whitebeard in an instant. Isn't this sick? Finally, the author is reminded to stop being stupid, improve strength and power, and enter the new world. After all, the new world is the world of the strong. .

Name: Dolson Carter Heath Gender: Male Age: around 27 years old Abilities: Animal type, phantom beast type, zombie spirit user (can transform into a corpse spirit, greatly increasing the power; can drink blood to restore life; killed enemies will be transformed into corpses to obey Hiss) Personality: Cruel, violent Character experience: The protagonist's enemies will not join the protagonist (Can be killed by the protagonist)

The pig's trotter is called Reinhard Dawn Bolkin. According to the naming pattern of One Piece, Bolkin is his name, right? Why does Mao always use the word "dawn" to address him?

The writing was okay, and the plot didn't collapse.

The writing is quite good, but the foreshadowing is too long. What you wrote is about hot-blooded pirates, not all the water in the sea.

Everything is okay, the writing is average, the content is okay, the only difference is the battle, and the strength settings. To be honest, most pirate novels have some vague strength settings, but what can I say about this novel? It's the kind of character that can be strong or weak, because there are no boundaries, so the strength is very vague. One second the protagonist may be defeated by unknown cadres, and the next second he directly kills the four emperors. This is a bit of a trap. The farming story was not written, and the battle story was not written. It feels like the author is a newbie publishing the book, but I don't feel like it. Anyway, I have a weird feeling.

This clock fruit can refer to Tokisaki Kurumi in Date A Live.

To be honest, the first dozens of chapters are really meaningless at all. It is meaningless to write such a long chapter at the beginning. There is no motivation for people to want to read further. It is not attractive at all. Most people will not read it after reading a few chapters. Of course, I did not read the rest. Also, don't give me any foreshadowing here. I believe that most people come to watch One Piece fandom just to have fun, not to grind. Okay, I'm done, goodbye.