
Narration System Starting from Konoha
by There Is A Tree In The Yard
About This Novel
Uchiha Sora suddenly became the younger brother of Erzhu. He spent all day doing nothing, and he and Nara Shikamaru were known as the two great ninjas in Konoha. No one knows that he has a narration system in his mind. As long as the ninja who hears the narration has emotional ups and downs, he can gain emotional points. Just looking at the strange things in the redemption space, Sora suddenly felt that this was an unfair system.
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Official(36)Scraped 6d ago
Don't understand the necessity of the protagonist's existence
First of all, the Hokage team consists of three genin and one teacher. The protagonist is too prominent to be forced in. Rather than doing this, it is better to let the protagonist disappear.
This is the only novel that I can't understand after reading it for 2 years. I would like to call it the strongest.
It feels like I have lived so long in vain and I can't even read a novel.
Looks a little weird
Author: Your book looks really weird.
Well, maybe the taste is different
I don't understand, what's the point of the author learning to write about Uchiha? Wouldn't it be better to write so much about the Uzumaki clan about warlocks?
After traveling through twelve years, the clan was still exterminated.
There are thousands of words in your mouth. Still don't know what to say.
What happened to the author
It's such a childish thing to write, a gas mask is all it takes, so why do you have so many scenes? Do you think I'm not shameless, obscene, and despicable enough? I want to improve it in the novel.
What is this?
What is all this? It's too confusing!
I am a pure tool person, this system is all entertainment products, and all I can exchange for after years of collection are funny skills (one-time use)
So funny
I like it very much, it's very interesting, especially the narration that keeps hitting my face. Faster, faster, more
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Official(36)Scraped 6d ago
Don't understand the necessity of the protagonist's existence
First of all, the Hokage team consists of three genin and one teacher. The protagonist is too prominent to be forced in. Rather than doing this, it is better to let the protagonist disappear.
This is the only novel that I can't understand after reading it for 2 years. I would like to call it the strongest.
It feels like I have lived so long in vain and I can't even read a novel.
Looks a little weird
Author: Your book looks really weird.
Well, maybe the taste is different
I don't understand, what's the point of the author learning to write about Uchiha? Wouldn't it be better to write so much about the Uzumaki clan about warlocks?
After traveling through twelve years, the clan was still exterminated.
There are thousands of words in your mouth. Still don't know what to say.
What happened to the author
It's such a childish thing to write, a gas mask is all it takes, so why do you have so many scenes? Do you think I'm not shameless, obscene, and despicable enough? I want to improve it in the novel.
What is this?
What is all this? It's too confusing!
I am a pure tool person, this system is all entertainment products, and all I can exchange for after years of collection are funny skills (one-time use)
So funny
I like it very much, it's very interesting, especially the narration that keeps hitting my face. Faster, faster, more
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A very novel and interesting Naruto fanfic. I don't know if he is the first to write a narration system. I feel that someone will probably imitate it in the future.




Good grass - Another way of telling spoilers, this narration system is quite interesting. The form of spoilers is not all-inclusive, but limited and timely, which is more similar to watching a barrage master complaining about the plot on TV.



Another way of telling spoilers, this narration system is quite interesting. The form of spoilers is not all-inclusive, but limited and timely, which is more similar to watching a barrage master complaining about the plot on TV.




Funny! Please ignore the protagonist, the narrator is the protagonist!






















