Douluo Dalu: I Am a Descendant of the Prime Minister
by Bear Save Me
About This Novel
A black figure appeared in the void and looked like a sleeping baby in front of him. It would be no exaggeration to say that this person's appearance was majestic, but he was indeed a bit shorter in height. Behind this person stood countless tall and stout people, and they were fearless and did not reveal their stupidity. There was a plop, and all these people except the leader knelt down, but some people had displeasure on their faces, but they did not show it. After the man looked at the baby for a while, his figure gradually disappeared. The people behind him then shouted: Farewell to the Prime Minister, I am willing to do it for the last generation. The Cao family will go through fire and water for generations, and they will not give up even if they die.
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Official(5)Scraped 7d ago
Is the author the single heroine Gu Yuena?
The subject matter is still good, but the dialogue does not have quotation marks and looks uncomfortable. There are no sentence breaks in some places and it does not read smoothly. There is also the issue of soul rings. Does it absorb the soul ring at the tenth level, or does the tenth palace of Yama automatically produce a guardian spirit as a soul ring?
The original content of Chapter 5 has been renamed, and the results have been reviewed again. It should be out tomorrow, and the new chapter will also be out tomorrow. Thank you for your understanding.
Damn it, 7 chapters are only 45,000 words? But the plot is quite good, it could just be a little less written😘😘
In Chapter 5, I wrote a bit of a prequel to Dou Er, but I can't post it and it's under review. I'll check it out then. If it doesn't work, I have no choice. The two changes are shown under review.
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Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 7d ago
Is the author the single heroine Gu Yuena?
The subject matter is still good, but the dialogue does not have quotation marks and looks uncomfortable. There are no sentence breaks in some places and it does not read smoothly. There is also the issue of soul rings. Does it absorb the soul ring at the tenth level, or does the tenth palace of Yama automatically produce a guardian spirit as a soul ring?
The original content of Chapter 5 has been renamed, and the results have been reviewed again. It should be out tomorrow, and the new chapter will also be out tomorrow. Thank you for your understanding.
Damn it, 7 chapters are only 45,000 words? But the plot is quite good, it could just be a little less written😘😘
In Chapter 5, I wrote a bit of a prequel to Dou Er, but I can't post it and it's under review. I'll check it out then. If it doesn't work, I have no choice. The two changes are shown under review.
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