I Am a Victim in Conan

It attracted me at first, the writing was pretty good, and then the characters were pretty good too. I also left a five-star comment, but after seeing it, I deleted that comment. Hey, let me put it this way, if you don't know how to write emotional lines, don't forcefully write them. For some reason, girls become brainless when they meet the male protagonist. During the process of rescuing the Miyano sisters, the two sisters were a bit pretentious. It was obviously such an intense and exciting chase, but the two sisters complained there, and later said that her legs were so stiff that she couldn't move. I feel relaxed in the front, but nervous in the back. I don't understand how this relaxation comes from? The writing is very fragmented. The author explains in the comments later that Miyano Shiho doesn't want the male protagonist to die because of him, but if the male protagonist fails to save you, will he get a failure ending? Can he still successfully escape the vortex of the organization, and can he be on his own? Moreover, Miyano Akemi is inexplicably very love-minded. She was not nervous during the chase. She didn't think about escaping. What if she was caught? But thinking about being shy and thinking about how handsome this man is, I was even so dazed that I bumped into the back of the male protagonist in front of me. This was in the process of being hunted! After successfully escaping, it was clear that the organization had not been destroyed yet, and how could the organization let you two off so easily? As a result, Miyano Akemi began to think wildly, became shy again, and wanted to explore the boy in front of her, but she could not feel a trace of nervousness. The male protagonist even asked the other party to take the initiative to use his account to shop online? Why is the male protagonist's character suddenly so brainless? Isn't this obviously abnormal? A boy lives alone and suddenly buys a lot of girls' things online at a certain time, especially when the organization will definitely check it out. The male protagonist's character shouldn't be so careless. I remember that the male protagonist was able to successfully escape after going back to the scene forty or fifty times, which at least proves that he is not that stupid. Really, when it comes to the emotional line, boys and girls are inexplicably lowered. It's impossible for Gin to just throw cigarette butts around at the scene. Doesn't this clearly leave clues to others? And there is saliva on the tobacco floor that can be tested for DNA. Later, I read the story and the author said that the heroine has not yet been decided, and then he said that he could also consider a harem. I still want to write about the harem. It's really better to have no cp at the beginning. When the two Miyano sisters were not written in the first 20 chapters, it was really well written. The character of the bounty hunter was really good, but the result was inexplicable after writing it. Later, it was said that Mariko thought the male protagonist was so good. The Miyano sisters were a bit contradictory and brainless in the beginning, but Mariko was forced to be added later. The fact that I wrote so much should prove that I am not criticizing or anything, and that I have read it carefully. It's because I thought it was well written at first, but it turned out to be like this. There should be no way to write this book without cp. Then the author can consider cp-free when writing this book, because the male protagonist is really well written. Write more interesting plots and other things, and don't write awkward ones.

Can the author say something? ? ? ? ? Can the author say something? ? ? ? ?

Gin Vodka died so quickly, I don't even know how to write it. Without Gin Vodka in the distillery, there will be no clues about the bosses.

The author is very strong.

It's pretty good. Is there anything similar that won't turn into a sad one?

If Gin Vodka could die so early, Akai Hide would have killed him early

Is it Haihara Ai?