
Pirate's Devouring Fruit
About This Novel
Welcome to read the new book "Infinite: Fusion Paradise" ~ -- In addition, the free channel for this book has been opened, and you can read it for free on QQ browser~ --------- If you want to overturn the world, force is just an insurance to avoid being slapped to death and dying halfway. Strategy and planning determine how many people behind you are willing to accompany you to overthrow that abnormal majesty that no one dares to challenge. A strange dual-power fruit caused by an accident, a soul from another world, planning step by step to accumulate strength, and attack the person sitting on the throne of God! Book group: 895889007 [Verification: Ren Sheng Ruo Meng]
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Official(106)Scraped 23d ago
Too wordy
After describing the psychology in one chapter, I start to talk about the background again. After describing the background, I talk about my own opinions and other random emotions. It's like a running account written by an elementary school student.
It was particularly uncomfortable to see
Everything needs to be explained, and those who read the Pirates fanfic will not know the plot. If you keep writing about the background, even if the protagonist is good, you have to emphasize n-changes, and the novel is written as an encyclopedia. Everything else is fine.
5 star good rating installment payment
There are too many inner activities, and basically 80% of them are inner self-talk. If you are not finished, who will be finished?
Devour?
I'm afraid you haven't figured out what swallowing means yet. Why don't you go to heaven to return the halo fruit and seize the fruit? These two fruits can be swallowed together? There is also a bug related to the saving halo fruit. After development and awakening, can we add an invincible halo, or an armor-breaking halo? Then we still need to combine the heaven-defying fruit? If you don't say anything else, just develop a time halo and the protagonist will become immortal. Please pay attention to your naming. Nothing related to Devouring has been changed to Devouring!
It's so poisonous, so poisonous.
I don't even understand what swallowing means, it's extremely poisonous.
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Community(0)
Official(106)Scraped 23d ago
Too wordy
After describing the psychology in one chapter, I start to talk about the background again. After describing the background, I talk about my own opinions and other random emotions. It's like a running account written by an elementary school student.
It was particularly uncomfortable to see
Everything needs to be explained, and those who read the Pirates fanfic will not know the plot. If you keep writing about the background, even if the protagonist is good, you have to emphasize n-changes, and the novel is written as an encyclopedia. Everything else is fine.
5 star good rating installment payment
There are too many inner activities, and basically 80% of them are inner self-talk. If you are not finished, who will be finished?
Devour?
I'm afraid you haven't figured out what swallowing means yet. Why don't you go to heaven to return the halo fruit and seize the fruit? These two fruits can be swallowed together? There is also a bug related to the saving halo fruit. After development and awakening, can we add an invincible halo, or an armor-breaking halo? Then we still need to combine the heaven-defying fruit? If you don't say anything else, just develop a time halo and the protagonist will become immortal. Please pay attention to your naming. Nothing related to Devouring has been changed to Devouring!
It's so poisonous, so poisonous.
I don't even understand what swallowing means, it's extremely poisonous.
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