Konoha Uchiha's Counterattack

No matter what they did during their reign, they would not hesitate in the face of life and death.

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Very well written. The plot is also great, but there are always gains and losses (personal thoughts)

Let's talk about the advantages first. The plot is okay. It is different from other Naruto fans. It focuses on life, the strength improvement is also reasonable, and the plot structure is relatively appropriate. The plot has its ups and downs and has a certain appeal. Regarding the author's thoughts and three views, they are very normal and in-depth. The analysis of the original work is quite reasonable, and the thoughts revealed are also relatively recognized by the public. Let's talk about the shortcomings. But there is something wrong with the strength setting and timeline. Especially the strength setting, the Jonin was set too weak at the beginning, which was not in line with the original work. Timeline aside, the original work itself has its own problems, and it wouldn't be a big deal if it could be brought back. Then there is the issue of writing style, which is the most important thing. First of all, the writing style is green and tasteless, with inappropriate wording, inappropriate details, inappropriate paragraphing, and serious stream-of-consciousness tendencies. The writing style is biased towards urban colloquialism, which is not easy to understand, and naturally there is no possibility of substitution. Secondly, there is almost no description of the battle process. Basically, a few ninjutsu are mentioned in one stroke. In normal works, a battle is described in at least thousands of words. I haven't finished reading it, I've only read part of it. These are some early comments about the book. In general, it is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. However, since the author is a newcomer, and the ideas and plot are good, I can continue to explore them in online articles, so I give it a four-star rating.

After reading the first few chapters, the author's writing style is too green. It's like a composition and there are a lot of dialogues.

I'm currently reading one before chapter 100. It's very poorly written, the plot is too blunt, and the fights are unimaginative.

Does the author have a single heroine in this article?

After reading the first two chapters, it was a complete account, and I was told to quit at the beginning.

Wasn't Fugaku still born after World War II?

Don't know what to say,. . . . . . . . Five-star praise