
Naruto: the Beginning of the Independent Uchiha
by Big Lazy Cat Who Loves To Move
About This Novel
In the ninja world, there shouldn't be only stories about Konoha!
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Official(4)Scraped 13d ago
It's over, Chapter 44: Epic Strengthening Danzo, this book is useless
Come on, your writing is okay, Sarutobi Hiruzen is such a dog! Two kings and four twos, one by one, the most invincible village in the universe let its talents wither away, leaving only three thousand Yuan family troops! Senju Tobirama couldn't help but found four idiots as his apprentices. Even four dogs would be stronger than them😎😎😎😎😎
My personal feeling
There are no weaknesses in writing Uchiha ninja fantasy. I found a problem. If the Uchiha family does not have the power to suppress everything, the wise and ruthless leader of the clan will be the best future for the family. I feel that the average brain of this family is not enough. Since the family spirit is relatively strong, the brain should be very smart, but it is reflected in Naruto that this family is a bunch of stupid pigs. This family needs a think tank formed by testing IQ to completely eliminate the elder system, training group, task group_war mission, secret mission, financial group, business group
Alas, Chapters 47-48 were written so that an unknown person came... Also, the dignified elder is about to take office as the clan leader. Even if he can't remember it himself, no one else can remember him? At the very least, arrange for someone to take care of your daily life, and a sister-in-law to cook and so on... Even ordinary people with a little money can afford to hire someone... This writing is too fake...
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 13d ago
It's over, Chapter 44: Epic Strengthening Danzo, this book is useless
Come on, your writing is okay, Sarutobi Hiruzen is such a dog! Two kings and four twos, one by one, the most invincible village in the universe let its talents wither away, leaving only three thousand Yuan family troops! Senju Tobirama couldn't help but found four idiots as his apprentices. Even four dogs would be stronger than them😎😎😎😎😎
My personal feeling
There are no weaknesses in writing Uchiha ninja fantasy. I found a problem. If the Uchiha family does not have the power to suppress everything, the wise and ruthless leader of the clan will be the best future for the family. I feel that the average brain of this family is not enough. Since the family spirit is relatively strong, the brain should be very smart, but it is reflected in Naruto that this family is a bunch of stupid pigs. This family needs a think tank formed by testing IQ to completely eliminate the elder system, training group, task group_war mission, secret mission, financial group, business group
Alas, Chapters 47-48 were written so that an unknown person came... Also, the dignified elder is about to take office as the clan leader. Even if he can't remember it himself, no one else can remember him? At the very least, arrange for someone to take care of your daily life, and a sister-in-law to cook and so on... Even ordinary people with a little money can afford to hire someone... This writing is too fake...









