Under One Person: Dad's Super God Journey
by Nonsense
About This Novel
When the perfect father travels to a world under one person, and when "Demons, ghosts, and ghosts leave quickly" resounds throughout the alien world, what kind of sparks will be created when energy magic and energy collide... What kind of splendor will the Black Shadow Corps, the Twelve Talismans, and the Eight Demonic Qi bloom? Standing in front of you now is: A disciple of Master Fang, A spokesperson for righteousness, The guardian behind District 13, The real core of the Dragon Group, The ninth immortal god, Old! ! Father! ! [Oh, one more thing, don't forget to collect it, thank you!
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Official(30)Scraped 3d ago
The fighting power of Jackie Chan's Adventure World is much higher than that of Lao Tianshi I hope the author has some ideas and doesn't do it blindly.
He suppressed his father's strength too hard and was not decisive enough.
The setting is about a father or a time traveler, but he doesn't know the plot. Is the setting being eaten? The plot adheres closely to the original text, and is the same as other fanfics. It's either invincible style or system style, it's just about different strengths and weaknesses. The power system in Jackie Chan's world can absolutely crush one person, but now it can only be equal. Is it reasonable? Dad's power is too slow to be unlocked, and the author relies too much on the original plot. Shouldn't he make up something of his own? I'm looking forward to the story of my father's overthrow of the one-man world, so come on, author! ! !
Chapter 20 If it were me, I would kill Lu Liang and Xia He. They are all in your hands. You threatened you and you still let it go.
Nanny nanny nanny uh uh uh uh uh uh
Without mentioning the content, there are a lot of typos in the charging chapter. I pointed them out to you, but you didn't change them. In some places, what was said above does not follow what follows. How did you have the nerve to charge? I have no desire to read any more. Whoever buys it is a complete injustice.
Second, set the character's name to create a play. The plot logic is not rigorous
The worst time my dad was hacked
You're right, but you're not entirely right. From a certain point of view, you are right, but from another point of view, you are wrong. I can't say it's completely wrong, I can only say it's still a little bit wrong between completely right. If it is wrong to ignore this point, then of course what you say is right, but if you examine whether what you say is right with a more rigorous attitude, then what you say is not right. In fact, looking back, what you said is right may be right in a static world, and what you say is wrong may be wrong from a metaphysical point of view.
I don't like licking the protagonist mindlessly
I came to see my father, not to see Zhang Chulan's nanny.
Are you a eunuch?
It's been a while since I've updated. How long will it take to update again?
There are quite a lot of OOC characters, and there are many points in the article that make the world of one person better than Jackie Chan's Adventures.
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Official(30)Scraped 3d ago
The fighting power of Jackie Chan's Adventure World is much higher than that of Lao Tianshi I hope the author has some ideas and doesn't do it blindly.
He suppressed his father's strength too hard and was not decisive enough.
The setting is about a father or a time traveler, but he doesn't know the plot. Is the setting being eaten? The plot adheres closely to the original text, and is the same as other fanfics. It's either invincible style or system style, it's just about different strengths and weaknesses. The power system in Jackie Chan's world can absolutely crush one person, but now it can only be equal. Is it reasonable? Dad's power is too slow to be unlocked, and the author relies too much on the original plot. Shouldn't he make up something of his own? I'm looking forward to the story of my father's overthrow of the one-man world, so come on, author! ! !
Chapter 20 If it were me, I would kill Lu Liang and Xia He. They are all in your hands. You threatened you and you still let it go.
Nanny nanny nanny uh uh uh uh uh uh
Without mentioning the content, there are a lot of typos in the charging chapter. I pointed them out to you, but you didn't change them. In some places, what was said above does not follow what follows. How did you have the nerve to charge? I have no desire to read any more. Whoever buys it is a complete injustice.
Second, set the character's name to create a play. The plot logic is not rigorous
The worst time my dad was hacked
You're right, but you're not entirely right. From a certain point of view, you are right, but from another point of view, you are wrong. I can't say it's completely wrong, I can only say it's still a little bit wrong between completely right. If it is wrong to ignore this point, then of course what you say is right, but if you examine whether what you say is right with a more rigorous attitude, then what you say is not right. In fact, looking back, what you said is right may be right in a static world, and what you say is wrong may be wrong from a metaphysical point of view.
I don't like licking the protagonist mindlessly
I came to see my father, not to see Zhang Chulan's nanny.
Are you a eunuch?
It's been a while since I've updated. How long will it take to update again?
There are quite a lot of OOC characters, and there are many points in the article that make the world of one person better than Jackie Chan's Adventures.
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