
Pirates Start with Breathing Techniques
About This Novel
Ps: The new book "Man Expands in the Pirate Realm" has been released. Please support the new book. Hood Hill accidentally traveled to the world of One Piece and got the witness system. If you witness the plot, you can draw a lottery to become stronger. At the beginning, I drew the strongest breathing method of Pillar Destroyer - God of Fire Kagura - Breath of the Sun. Follow Luffy in the East China Sea to pursue a man's romance, become a dancer on the Straw Hat Pirates, and embark on the greatest adventure in the world. Ps: Follow the boat.
What Readers Think
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Official(29)
Golden legend is the breath of the sun?
With all due respect, Demon Slayer's power system is very low. Even Hashira couldn't beat Zoro and Luffy at the beginning, so the breathing method is really low-level in the world of pirates.
. . . . How come it has such a high rating again? ? Confuse
I feel like it looks really awkward, and I don't have a sense of immersion at all. Will the author delete the book review?
The word "then" appears too much in the article, making it very unsound and awkward to read.
And then and then, and then everything. Isn't it awkward?
Is it fake to have such a high rating?
The plot twist in this writing is so poisonous that I can't stand it anymore
No, the plot hasn't changed at all
I originally wanted to follow the boat flow and compare my personality, but in the end nothing changed at all. The main character can be changed by some mysterious force at every turn, but the plot cannot be changed. It's too disgusting to set this up. Why should I read fan fiction if the plot can't be changed? Get to know the author, you are writing fan fiction! Not the One Piece novel version! Finally, we saw that there was going to be a battle at the top, and the protagonist got involved, but Ace still died in the end? If you let the protagonist block it for Ace, it would be better if the protagonist dies than if Ace dies! There are still regrets in Fang Nian's novel. Really, I don't even bother to talk about you anymore. Goodbye (ー_ー)!!
book club
Those who are interested can join. Nine two five two five one seven five nine
Let's get some weather fruit and add all kinds of breathing, Ness
What the hell happened right behind the good guy? You can either just copy the original work later.
I'll add a few lines at the end and talk about it from beginning to end, which has appeared several times in the original work!
Well written
I've had enough of naval genres and wanted to try a pirate genre or a ship genre. I didn't expect so many people to criticize me for having evil intentions. Let's be honest, we are all trapped in this society. I wanted to break free from this shackles in the novel. What was wrong with me? Just because I don't want to read naval novels, I was scolded for having bad views. I'm really aggrieved. Fortunately, I finally found a novel about boat flow. It feels good to review One Piece again.
It's already on the shelves, please ignore the typos.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(29)
Golden legend is the breath of the sun?
With all due respect, Demon Slayer's power system is very low. Even Hashira couldn't beat Zoro and Luffy at the beginning, so the breathing method is really low-level in the world of pirates.
. . . . How come it has such a high rating again? ? Confuse
I feel like it looks really awkward, and I don't have a sense of immersion at all. Will the author delete the book review?
The word "then" appears too much in the article, making it very unsound and awkward to read.
And then and then, and then everything. Isn't it awkward?
Is it fake to have such a high rating?
The plot twist in this writing is so poisonous that I can't stand it anymore
No, the plot hasn't changed at all
I originally wanted to follow the boat flow and compare my personality, but in the end nothing changed at all. The main character can be changed by some mysterious force at every turn, but the plot cannot be changed. It's too disgusting to set this up. Why should I read fan fiction if the plot can't be changed? Get to know the author, you are writing fan fiction! Not the One Piece novel version! Finally, we saw that there was going to be a battle at the top, and the protagonist got involved, but Ace still died in the end? If you let the protagonist block it for Ace, it would be better if the protagonist dies than if Ace dies! There are still regrets in Fang Nian's novel. Really, I don't even bother to talk about you anymore. Goodbye (ー_ー)!!
book club
Those who are interested can join. Nine two five two five one seven five nine
Let's get some weather fruit and add all kinds of breathing, Ness
What the hell happened right behind the good guy? You can either just copy the original work later.
I'll add a few lines at the end and talk about it from beginning to end, which has appeared several times in the original work!
Well written
I've had enough of naval genres and wanted to try a pirate genre or a ship genre. I didn't expect so many people to criticize me for having evil intentions. Let's be honest, we are all trapped in this society. I wanted to break free from this shackles in the novel. What was wrong with me? Just because I don't want to read naval novels, I was scolded for having bad views. I'm really aggrieved. Fortunately, I finally found a novel about boat flow. It feels good to review One Piece again.
It's already on the shelves, please ignore the typos.









