Pirates: Starting from the Demon King of Uta

人物刻画十分到位,该有的伏笔也有 It's a good fan fiction😪

Hasn't the protagonist's intelligence grown a bit? After reading 300 chapters, the most insignificant thing on the ship is the protagonist. The whole Ishiro II has no ideas of his own. The first one or two hundred chapters can be said to have side effects. I think you are innocent at heart, but after that, you are the fifth emperor and you are like a fool. You can't see your own position and thoughts at all. You can't compare to Luffy by a hair. The more you read, the more uncomfortable it becomes. Imagine a story about a bunch of nannies surrounding a Shiro II and helping him become the king. . This is the novel

After reading the first few chapters, it's so confusing that I can't describe it. My suggestion is that if you don't have a master's writing style, don't write the opening chapter like this. I thought I wasn't reading the first chapter.

It looks like it should be okay. Hope it won't be interrupted

There are no other adjectives except chuckle or chuckle, or "happily speaking" appears several times in a chapter, repeating a lot of words, the only advantage is that there is no mumbling.

主角是精神病人,但没必要写的跟个白吃傀儡一样吧? You also arranged "miss Ba Jin" for him.无语了,精神病人就不能是丑皇那样吗?我感觉我头一次看小说感觉自己该去治治脑子,完全看不懂,看多了感觉得去精神病院看看 It's just the autobiography of a fool.

What the hell, I want to curse people when I read it, now I recommend all novels, bad review

Flow-saving: The protagonist is even more mentally retarded than Luffy, the most retarded protagonist in the entire anime industry. His consciousness and brain thinking are not unified into one person throughout the whole process. Every sentence is irrelevant to the previous sentence, and every behavior is irrelevant to the current environment. The author has stuffed a person from a mental hospital into the body of the protagonist, and the protagonist has no idea what he is doing throughout the whole process. Well, you may think that the author wants to write that kind of crazy protagonist, but no, the protagonist does not even have a unified consciousness. For example, the scene is two people fighting, the protagonist is next to him, and then the protagonist has no connection with the entire plot and scene. He just stands in a daze on the side, shouting ah-ah-ah-ah-, it is simply a dementia.

I can't stand it anymore. He starts like a fool and keeps laughing. I really have no interest in the fool protagonist.

The main character is an idiot and imbecile