The Sky under the Cup of Hogwarts
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Anthony, who has a shuttle the size of a thermos cup, originally thought he could only be trapped in this world as a businessman. However, with the appearance of an owl, he found that he had traveled to the world of Harry Potter. He was no longer frustrated when he looked at the passage that was only the size of a teacup. Rita Skeeter, Peter Pettigrew, the wizarding world is really full of talents. But why is the world opposite so weird? Anthony thought as he looked at the cook opposite. "Hello, my name is Gao Yao." Anthony:... "I just want to learn magic..." Which one is more popular, the elixir of immortality or the elixir of youth? Why do you always want to grow something after planting blood orchids? How much is it worth to package Voldemort and sell it to Karma Taj...
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Official(27)Scraped 3d ago
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There are many poisonous reasons to avoid scribbling. The first world trade was nzt47, the drug that can activate the brain and make you smart. The protagonist got the first version. The protagonist can take the drug at will without any side effects, and can also use magic to copy it. Secondly, Hagrid was forced to pick up the protagonist for admission, and asked Hagrid to perform magic. It was really like Harry Potter treatment. Thirdly, when he entered Hogwarts at the beginning, he messed around, and suddenly he became close to Malfoy. He told him everything and gave him Snape's notes. Look, tell him all the secrets. Fourth, the second world myth is about getting a woman out of nowhere, grabbing Lu Su, and then ignoring her. Did the author himself forget that the protagonist also kept a woman in his room, and she has been at Hogwarts for more than a hundred chapters? Fourth, the life experience of the protagonist. At first, it was forcefully said that the protagonist is a Slytherin gene created by magic. However, in the latest chapter, the protagonist is an impostor. It suddenly collapsed. No one knows what the protagonist is. It is so powerful that it poisons all the places it can be poisoned.
It's obviously a novel with a good theme, but the writing is too naive.
Originally, I thought this was a very good novel with a very good subject matter, and it was good all the way down to the first medicine. (Although this is the first world, I think you can write with a higher level of style, which will be better) But later, it was really, really poisonous. In order to disgust Yi Xiaochuan, he took Susu into his own world. . . . This is you. . . . Because of this, it is estimated that many people will quit. Also, why did you expose the plot so quickly and pretend to be a prophet? ? What a pity. Really, this is a good subject, but the writing is too simple. I thought that when I got the medicine of the first world, the author wanted to write a protagonist with a high IQ, but I didn't expect it to be a protagonist with a lowered intelligence. . .
Disgusting 🤢
Ever since he brought people here, I can't stand it any more. He wouldn't have been able to do this kind of thing without a ten-year cerebral thrombosis.
The writing level is a bit low.
But you're not very used to writing novels?
The subject matter is very good, but it is too poisonous. It wants women at every turn, regardless of the consequences. Even after more than ten years of reading, I can't bear it.
When I saw chapters 13 and 14, I can only say that the author sought the blame himself and deliberately made people disgusting.
Talk about channel
Animagus are both born and learned to be able to slip into the tunnel. Is the author not thinking big enough? , Why can't I make a puppet? Transfiguration can also be achieved. It is not that difficult to make a smaller puppet and get through it with a double-sided mirror. . .
The name of the protagonist reminds me of the name of the protagonist of another novel-Anthony Weasley
The setting is so casual, the logic is too loose
The author didn't have an outline and just added whatever he thought of into the plot with many contradictions.
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Official(27)Scraped 3d ago
Open high and go low
There are many poisonous reasons to avoid scribbling. The first world trade was nzt47, the drug that can activate the brain and make you smart. The protagonist got the first version. The protagonist can take the drug at will without any side effects, and can also use magic to copy it. Secondly, Hagrid was forced to pick up the protagonist for admission, and asked Hagrid to perform magic. It was really like Harry Potter treatment. Thirdly, when he entered Hogwarts at the beginning, he messed around, and suddenly he became close to Malfoy. He told him everything and gave him Snape's notes. Look, tell him all the secrets. Fourth, the second world myth is about getting a woman out of nowhere, grabbing Lu Su, and then ignoring her. Did the author himself forget that the protagonist also kept a woman in his room, and she has been at Hogwarts for more than a hundred chapters? Fourth, the life experience of the protagonist. At first, it was forcefully said that the protagonist is a Slytherin gene created by magic. However, in the latest chapter, the protagonist is an impostor. It suddenly collapsed. No one knows what the protagonist is. It is so powerful that it poisons all the places it can be poisoned.
It's obviously a novel with a good theme, but the writing is too naive.
Originally, I thought this was a very good novel with a very good subject matter, and it was good all the way down to the first medicine. (Although this is the first world, I think you can write with a higher level of style, which will be better) But later, it was really, really poisonous. In order to disgust Yi Xiaochuan, he took Susu into his own world. . . . This is you. . . . Because of this, it is estimated that many people will quit. Also, why did you expose the plot so quickly and pretend to be a prophet? ? What a pity. Really, this is a good subject, but the writing is too simple. I thought that when I got the medicine of the first world, the author wanted to write a protagonist with a high IQ, but I didn't expect it to be a protagonist with a lowered intelligence. . .
Disgusting 🤢
Ever since he brought people here, I can't stand it any more. He wouldn't have been able to do this kind of thing without a ten-year cerebral thrombosis.
The writing level is a bit low.
But you're not very used to writing novels?
The subject matter is very good, but it is too poisonous. It wants women at every turn, regardless of the consequences. Even after more than ten years of reading, I can't bear it.
When I saw chapters 13 and 14, I can only say that the author sought the blame himself and deliberately made people disgusting.
Talk about channel
Animagus are both born and learned to be able to slip into the tunnel. Is the author not thinking big enough? , Why can't I make a puppet? Transfiguration can also be achieved. It is not that difficult to make a smaller puppet and get through it with a double-sided mirror. . .
The name of the protagonist reminds me of the name of the protagonist of another novel-Anthony Weasley
The setting is so casual, the logic is too loose
The author didn't have an outline and just added whatever he thought of into the plot with many contradictions.
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