I Became a God by Relying on Professional Panels
About This Novel
Lu Ming came to this new world. Under the calm and prosperous surface world, there was an inner world full of extraordinary powers. In this inner world where strength was respected and the weak were the strongest, all he could rely on was the career panel that followed him through time. [Fighter]: Use skills to temper your body and discover the treasures of the human body! [Martial Arts Master (Extraordinary)]: Use your spirit to nourish your body, and use your body to control your spirit. Only when your spirit and body are united can you step into the realm called the Saint! [Wanderer (Epic)]: The universe is a river, and the bubbles in the river are worlds. From the birth to the collapse of the bubbles, it is the life of a world. Travel through the mother river, use many worlds as resources, and build a road to the sky!
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Official(7)Scraped 7d ago
Inexplicably accepting a female apprentice, I don't know why, it's just to make up for the plot and the word count.
The conflict was arranged inexplicably and the protagonist went to the countryside to kill two people. Very stiff. Even if you want to join an organization, it should be the protagonist's initiative, instead of just arranging for the protagonist to join a gang, just arranging people from the city to go to the countryside to bury dog corpses, and then forcefully arrange killings and robberies. A plot like this can easily make readers queasy.
In today's social environment, what we need is a decisive protagonist. This is what we need now.
Another problem the author has is that the time schedule is too tight. There are only 50 chapters, and only a dozen days have passed. Time passes by the hour. This is terrible. The time span should be enlarged. It should be enlarged. You have to live it day by day. The protagonist's strength is as fast as blowing air, which is impossible to explain to others.
The protagonist's ability to handle things is relatively stupid
Goldfinger's creativity score is 8 points, and the protagonist's personality and ability to deal with things are negative! Maybe I wanted to write about a "warm as jade" character, but I ended up writing it as weak.
The writing is quite depressing. It's obviously Shueisha looking for trouble. Why do you have to bow your head?
Is this cut or something? Did you plan to take a look? It seems that your update has stopped moving.
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Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 7d ago
Inexplicably accepting a female apprentice, I don't know why, it's just to make up for the plot and the word count.
The conflict was arranged inexplicably and the protagonist went to the countryside to kill two people. Very stiff. Even if you want to join an organization, it should be the protagonist's initiative, instead of just arranging for the protagonist to join a gang, just arranging people from the city to go to the countryside to bury dog corpses, and then forcefully arrange killings and robberies. A plot like this can easily make readers queasy.
In today's social environment, what we need is a decisive protagonist. This is what we need now.
Another problem the author has is that the time schedule is too tight. There are only 50 chapters, and only a dozen days have passed. Time passes by the hour. This is terrible. The time span should be enlarged. It should be enlarged. You have to live it day by day. The protagonist's strength is as fast as blowing air, which is impossible to explain to others.
The protagonist's ability to handle things is relatively stupid
Goldfinger's creativity score is 8 points, and the protagonist's personality and ability to deal with things are negative! Maybe I wanted to write about a "warm as jade" character, but I ended up writing it as weak.
The writing is quite depressing. It's obviously Shueisha looking for trouble. Why do you have to bow your head?
Is this cut or something? Did you plan to take a look? It seems that your update has stopped moving.
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