
Villain: What Can Be Done If the Heroine Disobeys?
by A Ray Of Light Under The Moonlight
About This Novel
After all the effort, they should be together now, right? However... "Warning! Warning! The heroine's design has collapsed, and the plot has collapsed! Start the time back..." That's it! Can even this *** collapse? I am a Buddha! Very good heroine... You successfully caught my attention! Hehe, the heroine is disobedient and just wants to be beaten! Just hit it!
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Official(7)Scraped 11d ago
Can you read all the chapters before speaking, and judge others just by reading the first part? Sorry, if you think he is just the kind of villain from the old street, then just go ahead! Which book do you think my plot is similar to? If you want cool articles, don't come here to read them! There is no absolute justice or evil here, everyone can be the protagonist. If we want to talk about characteristics, let's focus on group portraits! The first book may not be as well written, but I will try my best to portray their story satisfactorily.
My personal views and thoughts
In my opinion, eunuchs are the end of the characters in the novel, but they will not be ours. I hope that the group of people I write can have a happy end! What if I give you a knife? Is there a possibility, what if there is a reversal?
The writing is very poor
There's no idea, the writing is poor, and it's very confusing.
What did you write? ? ?
It's such a mess, it makes my head hurt just to look at it. Author, you must be very young, right? First of all, it is unclear whether the voice of the heart is heard. The second thing is that the heroines are all reborn, but... You fell apart as soon as the proposal plot started. What's going on with the heroine? Marry or not? Oops, a policewoman came out and the heroine became a decoration... She didn't even have a single line in several chapters. By the way, who is the one who came to steal the bride? The heroine's bodyguard? Driver? Colleague? There was no introduction at all about who he was, just the title of the male protagonist. Then how did he know the heroine? Why are you here to steal the bride again? ? ? She was robbed of a bride, but the heroine didn't even have a single line? ? ? Either follow the plot and the male protagonist succeeds in snatching the bride. Either he doesn't follow the plot and the heroine says he is sick... But... What about such an older heroine? What about the father-in-law who is even called dad? Forget it, there are no lines, not even a description... There is also the description of the policewoman, no matter how tragic or great she is. This is the heroine's role now, why are you describing her? Won't you write it later? Then just when I thought the policewomen were pulling out their guns to send that fool to jail... They actually brought out Chi You... Oh my god, I can't hold myself back. Author, what are you writing? ? ? The novel has just begun and you're writing about the finale? ? ? Forget it, I really can't handle this poison.
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作者,重生流,心声流,日记流,都烂大街了,你可以选一种新的流派来写才好看,比如反派想摆烂跟主角交好,但女主角专针对主角大结局把主角变成♂后就放到美国那里,🤡然后弱小的反派被女主们一步给嘿嘿嘿嘿嘿嘿嘿嘿,现在的反派文都是反派针对主角,那你为何不改一下女主们针对主角,目前没有人这样子写
Advice from the author!
You think what I wrote is boring, right? Sorry, I didn't take advantage of your wishes. I've read too many silly and cool articles, and I'm a little tired of them, so I wrote one myself on a whim! If you want to see the current male lead pretending to be cool and slap the original male lead in the face, give up as soon as possible. I don't have anything like this here. It's too smart! In me, ordinary people also have shining points, which cannot satisfy the cool points of you who are the best in the world. Can it be an individual, but not a group portrait? Obviously everyone has contributed, why should we only praise the protagonist? They were all created by me, who am I to favor only one person? It's like they are all born to the same mother, why should they favor one over the other? It can highlight the halo of the protagonist, but not too much!
There is almost no need to read the plot, you will feel familiar just looking at these directories. I read every villain story as soon as it comes out. I think you wrote this novel because you read other villain stories. The routines are almost all used by other villain stories. Not to mention that the heroine's rebirth just appeared a few years ago, which is quite interesting and is now available in books. It has become a standard template. If the protagonist doesn't know that his heroine is reborn, that's like taking off his pants and farting. Anyone with a normal mind would know that the heroine is not normal and may have been reborn. However, this idiot protagonist couldn't figure it out even with his little brain for half a year. The part about Emperor Yan and Chiyou is purely based on the popularity. In addition, the protagonist's personality is very bad, and he starts off as a dog-licker. The purity is full. Then when facing the Son of Luck later, he was slapped in the face by all kinds of surprises. I can say that it is full of purity. The other novels are all bad, and the other villain stories are all bad. You see, this new book is a complete copy of other novels. Except for a little bit of new stuff, most of the stuff is the same as the other villains. The contrast ratio is as high as 50% or more
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Official(7)Scraped 11d ago
Can you read all the chapters before speaking, and judge others just by reading the first part? Sorry, if you think he is just the kind of villain from the old street, then just go ahead! Which book do you think my plot is similar to? If you want cool articles, don't come here to read them! There is no absolute justice or evil here, everyone can be the protagonist. If we want to talk about characteristics, let's focus on group portraits! The first book may not be as well written, but I will try my best to portray their story satisfactorily.
My personal views and thoughts
In my opinion, eunuchs are the end of the characters in the novel, but they will not be ours. I hope that the group of people I write can have a happy end! What if I give you a knife? Is there a possibility, what if there is a reversal?
The writing is very poor
There's no idea, the writing is poor, and it's very confusing.
What did you write? ? ?
It's such a mess, it makes my head hurt just to look at it. Author, you must be very young, right? First of all, it is unclear whether the voice of the heart is heard. The second thing is that the heroines are all reborn, but... You fell apart as soon as the proposal plot started. What's going on with the heroine? Marry or not? Oops, a policewoman came out and the heroine became a decoration... She didn't even have a single line in several chapters. By the way, who is the one who came to steal the bride? The heroine's bodyguard? Driver? Colleague? There was no introduction at all about who he was, just the title of the male protagonist. Then how did he know the heroine? Why are you here to steal the bride again? ? ? She was robbed of a bride, but the heroine didn't even have a single line? ? ? Either follow the plot and the male protagonist succeeds in snatching the bride. Either he doesn't follow the plot and the heroine says he is sick... But... What about such an older heroine? What about the father-in-law who is even called dad? Forget it, there are no lines, not even a description... There is also the description of the policewoman, no matter how tragic or great she is. This is the heroine's role now, why are you describing her? Won't you write it later? Then just when I thought the policewomen were pulling out their guns to send that fool to jail... They actually brought out Chi You... Oh my god, I can't hold myself back. Author, what are you writing? ? ? The novel has just begun and you're writing about the finale? ? ? Forget it, I really can't handle this poison.
The author looks here
作者,重生流,心声流,日记流,都烂大街了,你可以选一种新的流派来写才好看,比如反派想摆烂跟主角交好,但女主角专针对主角大结局把主角变成♂后就放到美国那里,🤡然后弱小的反派被女主们一步给嘿嘿嘿嘿嘿嘿嘿嘿,现在的反派文都是反派针对主角,那你为何不改一下女主们针对主角,目前没有人这样子写
Advice from the author!
You think what I wrote is boring, right? Sorry, I didn't take advantage of your wishes. I've read too many silly and cool articles, and I'm a little tired of them, so I wrote one myself on a whim! If you want to see the current male lead pretending to be cool and slap the original male lead in the face, give up as soon as possible. I don't have anything like this here. It's too smart! In me, ordinary people also have shining points, which cannot satisfy the cool points of you who are the best in the world. Can it be an individual, but not a group portrait? Obviously everyone has contributed, why should we only praise the protagonist? They were all created by me, who am I to favor only one person? It's like they are all born to the same mother, why should they favor one over the other? It can highlight the halo of the protagonist, but not too much!
There is almost no need to read the plot, you will feel familiar just looking at these directories. I read every villain story as soon as it comes out. I think you wrote this novel because you read other villain stories. The routines are almost all used by other villain stories. Not to mention that the heroine's rebirth just appeared a few years ago, which is quite interesting and is now available in books. It has become a standard template. If the protagonist doesn't know that his heroine is reborn, that's like taking off his pants and farting. Anyone with a normal mind would know that the heroine is not normal and may have been reborn. However, this idiot protagonist couldn't figure it out even with his little brain for half a year. The part about Emperor Yan and Chiyou is purely based on the popularity. In addition, the protagonist's personality is very bad, and he starts off as a dog-licker. The purity is full. Then when facing the Son of Luck later, he was slapped in the face by all kinds of surprises. I can say that it is full of purity. The other novels are all bad, and the other villain stories are all bad. You see, this new book is a complete copy of other novels. Except for a little bit of new stuff, most of the stuff is the same as the other villains. The contrast ratio is as high as 50% or more









