Versatile Mage: the Sun Angel of the End

The more I read Chapter 80, the more uncomfortable I feel. Nothing I can write with my feet is better than this.

Cool article, "Salang, your daughter is prettier than you~", multiple heroines, Shura Field, twisted article, Tianbing's new work, sweet love and many beautiful ladies~

If I have the heart, I will continue to watch it. It is much better than Mu Ningxue. I really don't understand why so many people like to lick Mu Ningxue and change it to Zhili. If I had known that the big devil finally succeeded, part of the reason was the memories of my childhood. The demon transformed into a demon and sacrificed his life to save others. Coupled with the long period of shamelessness, each time traveler easily conquered it. I am really speechless.

Author, have you never watched Versatile Mage? The Versatile Mage is a novel with a world background of disaster, cultivation, and passion. The result? Your fanfic is written as a romance light novel, and the protagonist's character is exactly that of the gentle Asashi in the Japanese manga light novel. Don't you think it's outrageous for you to write a romantic light novel in a world where there is a disaster and humans are struggling to survive?

The novel alone is good, but it shouldn't be considered a fanfic about a full-time mage. At least it's not a world. You can open it at will and have no sense of strength at all. A mid-level person can use super magic tools and even forbidden magic tools based on his background. This is directly in conflict with the setting of the whole magic. The author has not thought about mental power at all. The problem is, even the magic blueprint can only be used when the strength is reached. The power of the ice crystal bow is also based on the strength of the user, and it even consumes mental energy. You can use a magic tool with a basic attack comparable to a forbidden spell, and the user is still a mid-level mage. If there is such a powerful magic tool, is it necessary for the holy city to exist? Whoever has this thing is the manager of world order! In the original work of Quanfa, the Holy City is supreme and is the place where Forbidden Curse mages are managed. They will kill those who have a high probability of becoming Forbidden Curses and resist their rule, such as the victims and Mo Fan who can become demonized. They will destroy all forces that threaten their rule. However, in this book, a supporting character takes off at the beginning, with more luxurious magic weapons than Zhao Manyan. Forbidden spell magic tools and ice crystal brake bow-level magic tools are fully powerful and can be used casually. His parents started cultivating forbidden spells, and the strength of a family is stronger than that of the Holy City. It is outrageous. If the protagonist also cheats, then forget it, but this book is a waste of protagonists. Although the protagonist is much stronger than his contemporaries, he can't do anything better than a second female lead. I really can't stand it. The second female lead looks like a dog licker and provides everything to the protagonist. And then the protagonist has a love brain and only likes the first female lead. I'm really speechless. I can't read it as a cool novel, but it's not particularly sad as a sadistic novel. I can only read it as a dog licking novel. I have read so many fanfics, but they are all average, so I might as well re-read the original text several times. Here are some suggestions for the author. If I write another French fanfic, I will either have no brains and follow the protagonist's line and gain fame and beauty in the world; In the human world, for example, the forbidden magic weapon on the heroine in this book is just as useful as free money. It is really too advanced to be related to the great monarch or even the supreme monarch at the beginning, but the setting of the Miao people in the book is very good and novel; the timeline can also be directly moved to a thousand years later, a few hundred years after Mo Fan's death, the sea monster returns, and the protagonist rises in the crisis to save humanity again. The article is similar to the relationship between Dou Yi and Dou San. At present, there is an embarrassing situation in French fan fiction, that is, the plot repetition rate is too high, including awakening, crisis in the ancient capital, school battles, and siren invasion, and the novelty is too low. If the author is rich in inspiration, adds unique small main lines, and changes the big main lines, more people will naturally like to read it. I am currently a student and have no time to write. Otherwise, I would have written one myself. I hope the author can work hard and I can read a good-looking French fanfic after graduating from high school.

It can be said that this book has never been popular, but its performance has been steadily increasing. When I first started writing a book, adding a few collections every day gave me comfort. Now I add dozens of collections every day. If the collection is less than fifty, I will feel that my performance today is not good. After it was put on the shelves, I got all the monthly passes through updates, and now I have quite a few real monthly passes. There are also several rewards. I updated it ten times after it was released, and only then did I get 200+ first orders, which is an average of 20+ per chapter. It is rising every day now, and it has reached around 60, which is gratifying. I also searched for full-time mage in the past, but couldn't find it after scrolling down for a long time. It was better to search for "full-time mage". It is also a great improvement to be able to read this book in the tenth to fourteenth volumes now. Summary: This book is getting better and better. Thank you to all book friends for your support. You also participated in many factors in the creation of this book. This book can reach 850,000. In addition to the author's coding, there is also everyone's support and help. Finally, I wish this book will get better and better!

It feels like the author has put a lot of thought into the setting, but for some reason I always feel that there is a lack of desire to continue reading. It obviously does not revolve around the development line of the protagonist Mo Fan, but it is too bland. Is it my imagination?

It's too bland if you don't give up in the early stage. If the spell system you arrange in the early stage is of the auxiliary type, this kind of start is quite good.

It would be even better if Jiang Yali could be brought into the harem

Does the heroine have Mu Ningxue? Is it single or multiple?