Mystery: the Stars Returner

It can only be said that the author's vision is too low, but he wants to write high-end things, which will make people feel ridiculous. For example, which outsider can value such things as tarot cards? As a result, Tarot cards were used as a trading tool, and Sharon and the others were trapped by a small noble who was not even a Beyonder, and the protagonist, a Sequence 8 person, was required to rescue them? Sequence Five, why don't you take a look at what you wrote? They are very capable when facing the military. What did you write? Are you afraid of hurting ordinary people? Then they should just give up when facing the Rose School. After all, their battle will definitely hurt ordinary people. You don't know how Caspars died. The writing is really a mess. I read it one by one. I have endured all the previous problems. After all, I can't expect a book to be well-written. I won't correct some errors in settings. So you wrote it like this later?

The protagonist is just a self-righteous bastard who becomes a traitor intentionally or unintentionally. If he does it a few more times, the true God on earth and the earth will be gone, and the protagonist will be happy😴😎👎

The author knows how to disgust people. Since the introduction of the protagonist, the barrier has been weakened, and the invasion of the gods has become more polluted. He has single-handedly allowed the alien gods to increase their influence on the earth. The true gods on the earth resisted the alien gods in the suffering star world. As a result, the protagonist came with a large-scale bombing cannon, and their kingdom of gods was almost destroyed. There is no old love in the earth. Counting all the true gods, there are only 6 true gods left. You must know that there were originally 10, and their beliefs were only the goddess of the night and the god of steam. The two are relatively stable. Soon the anchor of the goddess of the night will be unstable. It seems that the protagonist has not done anything good. He even actively welcomes and guides the attacks of the outside gods into the barrier to bombard the kingdom of the true gods.

The author's outline is not well laid out, and the cheats given to the protagonist are unreasonable. Giving a pillar, something like Klein is enough. The downfall is the meeting of the Outer Gods. If you want to hold a meeting of the Outer Gods, then your own position must be on the side of the Outer Gods. If the protagonist is from the dark side, that's okay. If the challenge is high enough, just go against Klein and the Seven Gods. But it turns out that the protagonist wants to protect the earth. Damn it, you're crazy. Taking a step back, holding a meeting must bring some benefits. For example, every time a meeting is held, the more outside gods there are, the protagonist's golden fingers or strength can be improved, but the result is useless. So if you hold this meeting, it will not be good for you. Why don't you hold it? In total, I have read more than 100 chapters, and I feel that the protagonist is a psychopath and the author is seriously self-indulgent.

I'm quite speechless. Adam and the High Dimensional Overlooker did this. I feel that there was no need to introduce the Phoenix Ancestor at the beginning. If there was no Phoenix Ancestor, everything would be easy to say and the subsequent plot would not be right. Anyway, it is like this for me, a fan of the goddess of the night. It was not good for Si, very unfriendly. Now, the goddess of the night is also the opposite of the protagonist. The protagonist relies entirely on the outside gods. The goddess of the night and other true gods are written here as quite stupid. In a situation like this, shouldn't they really join forces to find an opportunity to kill the protagonist with one blow? As a result... I don't know what to say. Now I feel that this plot will be the same as the Aurora Society foreign aid book. At least the Decline King is full of divinity. No matter what happens on the earth, it can be explained. As long as the tricks are not outrageous, it is basically reasonable. However, the protagonist, an Earthling, still does this trick. I am really disgusted. I read the fanfic in the hope of a good ending, not a direction that is more unpleasant than the original work. What I hope to see is a reasonable (feeling reasonable, but very unpleasant to watch) mysterious fanfic, not one where the protagonist Long Aotian kills a popular character in the original work and makes a lot of mistakes. I can only say that the author Niu Pi sincerely persuades us to quit, so everyone should run away quickly.

The writing style is excellent, the content setting is very novel and eye-catching, especially the star-studded protagonist setting, which made me feel immersed in the story. However, the chapters are too few and not enough to watch. I look forward to the following plots.

You can read it if you are not good at reading, but after reading more than ten chapters, the description is very rough, and some parts are not even very reasonable. When you were dealing with those two big men earlier, you didn't know whether the rules you made were successful. If you were successful, wouldn't it consume your spiritual energy?

From the time you followed us for more than 100,000 words to now, the plot has become more and more confusing. I really don't know what to write to continue the development according to the timeline of the original work. Some people who read the mystery wanted to see the bullshit ambiguity you wrote there, so they returned the favor with dozens of pictures.

The rating must be brushed up, it's too fake and doesn't look good at all.

One May Day holiday took me six chapters to save, and now I have less than ten chapters... Ε=ε=(((＞Д＜)ノノ!!